Mayank:

good try..need lots of work on lipsing.....

Joan Delmont:

Your move are too violent.

Noah Arntson:

Great expressions and gestures. The gesturing seems kind of too strong and snappy, if they were toned down this would be awesome.

Nate Lane:

haha, that's just creepy man... with the eyes... hehe, anyways... I think you've done awesome! One thing I'll mention is the hand poses. You seem to have the "W" pose with the hands repeated a few time (where the hands are up next to the head). Try to change that up a bot maybe. Keep it up tho man, its looking great :D

Vanessa Blair:

You have a lot going on with regards to your character's reactions. If you toned down their actions your animation would look better visually. Sometimes subtlety is the way to go. Great job though, and I love the dead guy's face on the last frame :)

Eric Huelin:

Over acting all around.

Janarthanan:

Gud poses..but lot of jerky moves..Hope u have followed snappy style of animating... could have made it more interesting...

Jarryd:

I got the impression that most of the animations were over-acted or forced, especially the first voices grin after he says his line

I like the concept for the secondary character though, even as the second voice followed him walking with his head, that was a nice touch.

Ken Rice:

Good effort here I think - however the walking character in the background serves no purpose and is very distracting. Your poses seem to be very extreme and lurch from one to another - you need to tone things down and just include the key poses that work.

Shannon:

You have a good start. You might want to simplify your animation--you have a lot of poses packed in there.

Mike Courtney:

the timing needs work

Andy Bewernick:

Cool

James Fearn-Wannan:

The acting seems a little bit .. erratic and without purpose ..

David Shum:

haha funny :)
I like the guy freaking out in the background

Thiago Calçado:

characters frighten late!

Santiago Montenegro:

funny. and the final poses are good too

Lianna Scrimger:

beware the 'w' pose you use it a ton in here

Andy Simpson:

good timing... and acting