Marco Palmieri:

some ok poses, but the transitions are too rigid and over done.

Erik Westlund:

Good use of three different rigs for the three different characters although MooM is so small he gets lost in the chair. I like some of the poses on Sergio (? strut). Nice pause before spelling "b-o-d-y-s". Movements are a bit start stop. Big truck in with the camera seems forced; doesn't actually support story.

Andrew:

i like the second character's animation. would have looked good if there was a little continuation of movement after he swings his arm. right now if just stops

Andy Menter:

i have a feeling that anything i have to say, you already know...so...keep at it i guess.

Nate Lane:

haha that's pretty funny stuff man. I love the little guy. One thing that I think you could fix is the head movement of the second guy from frame 160 to 180 or so. I think that he's shaking his head a couple more times than you need. Anyways, it's looking great man. Keep it up!

Eric Huelin:

Movements are too jittery, acting doesn't match what is being said.

chakravarma:

try to build a concept.

Mike Courtney:

the holds need to be moving holds instead of freezing the character

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think some of your poses are quite good but it's being let down by the simple tweening..

jonas bech:

the kid is to small

Paul Naas:

Nice job. I didn't catch Sergio's final expression the first time through. Think about maybe moving that pose up to when he's saying "s", so we have more time to read it. It's a great pose and expression, and it's a shame it gets lost just before the cut.

Santiago Montenegro:

watch the fingers! they looks stiff