Marco Palmieri:

lip sync needs work. some ok poses.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

if you not going to show the mouth...you really need to push your poses to get emotion...

Andrew:

because the two masked characters are, well...masked, their acting has to be taken up a notch to convey what's happening. better acting would have helped in the absence of lip sync

Nate Lane:

cool man. It''s looking pretty good! One thing that you could maybe add is some more lower body movement, especially for the first guy in the blue. Because even though his lower body is off screen, it still shows in the upper body what he has done with his lower, such as weight shifts. I think you could do a bit of work with the hips as he goes from pose to pose. This would really help you out a lot, and make it a bit more convincing. Anyways, keep it up man!

Noah Arntson:

Unfortunately, I wish that I could have seen some lip movement through the mask.

Jason Smith:

Try pushing those poses a little more on the blue guy, when he points, nice overlapping action on the hair! Very funny punchline!

Janarthanan:

Is there a lip sync there?????lack of balance..long way to go..need improvement

vivek:

hai its nise but u want to improve inliping&action

Pete Shand:

nice work, need to work on getting it smooth

chakravarma:

looking nice.

Mayank:

Great job..

Adam Giangregorio:

It's ok to have characters with no visible mouths, but if you do, you have to make sure to put in extra body language so that there is no chance of the audience being confused as to who is talking.

Mike Courtney:

work on the overlapping actions

Peter Satera:

Hehe, quite good. However try get less static movements in your guy and more of a flow of movement. Don't keyframe limbs all on the same keyframe. It will come out robotic like that.

Good try!

Amdbcg:

lip sync is off, and his tongue magically slips through the mesh

Ben Hatton:

Confusing spatially - needs something to establish where everyone is.

Santiago Montenegro:

jeje great idea... very creative

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think it's alright.. the chap in blue seems a little bit floaty.. pose-to-pose.. though