Moe Zart Surprise
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Arindam:
ok
Greg Wark:
Remove/delay cellphone grab at end, it seems unnatural while speaking the line
Steve C:
I like this one a lot. The knee movement under the table looks great and adds to his frustration. Great work on it. And the 'Moe Zart' is awesome.
Ryan Lowe:
The cell phone isn't necessary. It's strange... otherwise good motion. I like the final piece in your reel better however. It doesn't need the paper toss at the beginning. A little repetitive with the head shake as well.
Lianna Scrimger:
I'd lose the cellphone at the end, it feels pretty contrived.
Ismael Ontiveros:
excellent job, but i think that the phone its out of line, its a secondary animation that you dont want in this particular moment
Louis Ng:
The expression at the end when he brought up the phone seems a bit. . .expressionless . ..
I like how u interpret the 'sigh' at the beginning as a shove of the paper.
BrunoDestefani:
Nice poses and timing, but the scene is too dark, and too far away. Why does he answer a cell phone at the end?
Jason Smith:
Moe Zart.... great!
Emmanuel:
I don't get the ending why he has a cell phone.
Paul Robbins:
Really nice idea with the bouncing leg. It did a good job of showing his angst. It matched the tone of the clip well.
Joaquin Bello:
you have some great moments, but the phone its a bit distracting
Richard Bannister:
Unfortunately I think the phone at the end spoils a potentially good piece.
Jean-Luc Delhougne:
You nailed some movements very well, like the stressful foot tapping or the phone shaking... Nice ;)
Enrico Fioretti:
"Moe Zart" so funny!!!
Erik Westlund:
Dark setting obscures character silhouette a little, as does the placement of the window frame running down his line of action.









Animator: Julien Abenhaim
Description: Music composer finds out about what the director did. He is in his modern studio when he learns.
Experience: 1 Year
Time taken: 30 hours here and there