New York

Final Rating: 2.7. Finished: 70 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Leon Dexter

Description: A basic interpretation of the audio. Just the two characters acting out what they are saying.

Experience: Just under a year

Time taken: quite long, not sure... 15 hours?

Comments:

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Jeffrey Lee:

nice render. your animation is very floaty. don't be afraid to not move your characters. Hope that helps. Cheers and good luck.

Ken Rice:

good effort - really floaty though

Mark Persson:

Nice..... needs a lot of work on it!

Keep up with the good work!

Jesse Colucci:

The guy character's movements seem to wander a bit, no clear direction. Good job though!

Jon Mummery:

Hi, the girl character is a little too floaty for me. She seems to glide between poses without really striking them.

Kenny Roy:

The framing downplays the BG character, which is dangerous when the performance is a little subdued. You lose a lot of your effort by sticking her in the BG....

Tiffany Davern:

Nice job on the lip sync. The girl seemed just a little stiff, especially on the fingers while she was waving her hands around. Watch some people talk for a little bit at a restaurant, when they move their hands their fingers bend in a little, especially on their pinky and ring finger. It's subtle, so don't over do it, but that's the only error I noticed. Other than that, very nice animation. ^^

Mike Courtney:

floaty

Tim Lobes:

Floaty

Andre de Villiers:

Very floaty. Hit some key poses.. The lipsync needs a lot of work. Camera is too high.

Ashwani:

nice