Ken Rice:

nice rig - animation is very floaty in places

Mike Hoffman:

Very cool style!

Mark Persson:

Funny idea and good work! Love the cartoon style...it feels alive but most of the movement are to slow. You need to speed it up!
The lipsync needs more work on. and maybe you could zoom in a bit.

Keep up with the good work!

Jesse Colucci:

Very cool. The action seems a little slow though. Nice overall.

David Higgins:

Very floaty.

Barnabas Boehler:

Cool idea...what animation program did you use? It's always nice to see 2-D work.

My only problem is her head is swaying around a little much.

Pete Shand:

animation is looking a bit floating, try to get more keys in there so theres less tweening

excelbarrett:

was u with the eyes of the gray guy from frames 9 - 38. good job just need some more work.

nice work

Mariah:

Great toon shading won't make up for slow, awkward animation.

Ashwani:

good effort

ROMI S PAL:

need 2 work on timming

Amdbcg:

looks like a toon shading on cg... makes sens though :)

Derek:

floaty. hold your poses

Kenny Roy:

Try more pose-to-pose next time. There's some floating in this piece that could be rectified quickly.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the eye twich looks weird.. i think its alittle too fast. good work

Stephen Dahler:

Nice work!! you have some nice gestures here but id say everything is a little to floaty. if you can nail some more weight in the movements it will really express your poses. keep up the good work

RJay Bengelink:

Love the animation style. The flow of the movement needs some work. Keep at it.

Mike Courtney:

nice start, work on the arcs

natalie:

Not bad but they are not the kind of characters I d remember or.. miss.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Show us exactly what you want us to see when you want us to see it. When both characters move all the time by almost the same amounts, it's really hard for your audience to know where they should be looking.

Andre de Villiers:

kindof reminded me a movie called 'A Waking Life'

dard:

The eye blinks are a bit odd. The lower eye lids should come much higher and seems to be doing a bit too much squash and stretch when it settles.

Stephen:

I like the characters, and it seems like a good approach, but the movements of the characters seem random, at least until the end.

Eric Huelin:

Cute characters but there seems to be an unwanted neck flutter that is quite distracting and the eye blinks snaps to fully open eyes that also is distracting. The right ear when the gray wolf turns should flop in towards the face as he turns. To see what I mean touch your ear lobes with flat hands by the tip of your fingers and turn your head swiftly to one side while your fingertips are still touching your ears. Notice that one hand is near to your cheek and the other one at the nape of your neck.