Chris Sullivan:

It's too robotic. Work on the 12 principles.

Jeffrey Lee:

Work on your timing. Go from pose to pose and see how your timing looks before doing anything else. For an example, he kind of floats off the chair. He should get off the chair a lot faster. Hope that helps. Cheers and good luck.

Fernando Porcel:

Nice animation.
The movement of the head of the man character when he stands is a bit strange. The arms of the girl are a bit floty. The girl makes no eye contact with the man. Only a comment. Cheers!

Ken Rice:

good effort - however your animation is floaty. The guy has no weight when he stands up and the girl isn't looking at the guy. Also the guy's left hand twists too far round.

Mark Persson:

Good work!

Brad Bradbury:

The characters are really floating plan their exact resting location and think more about how they get from one pose to another.

Lavendra Love:

work more on fingers and check the time spacing

deepak:

looks floaty allover places. try to add some halt keys bdfore other pose starts and the keys should not be at the same place. i mean curvs of hand, leg, hip and so on should no be key at same place.

Andre de Villiers:

Needs some stronger poses. Very floaty.

Brian Bredehoeft:

Good aposes, but the inbetweens get a little muddy.

Mike Courtney:

floaty in places, almost popping in others

Ashwani:

good work keep it up