New York

Final Rating: 2.15. Finished: 76 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: VIDAL Guillaume

Description: It\'s just a preview, lack of time for the render.
For the story : the thief pricks the suitcase while the woman speaks.

Experience: 9 month as student

Time taken: last three days before the end

Comments:

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Ken Rice:

Good effort - I little too much going on - not sure where to look. Try and focus on the main action.

Michael Cawood:

The focus seems to be too much on the character steeling the bag. You really didn't need to make the camera rotate around either.

Andy Hass:

It's a funny idea for sure. Hopefully you can find a better rig next time so you can add performance in the face. I'd say your thief character has the best animation here and the girl is the least developed.

Barnabas Boehler:

You should think about your staging. I would recommend having her face slightly away from the guy who's trying to steal her bag

Tash:

a very abstract piece, makes for iteresting watching

C. Ben Snell:

Good start, like the thief idea in the background.

Mark Persson:

Funny and great idea and good work, but it needs more work on the character.

Keep up with the good work!

Adam Waters:

need better rigs that have lip sync, and some study on camera work. keep working hard though

Lavendra Love:

very poor acting poses

Santiago Montenegro:

good..effort.. but the next time you can use a better rig...in the resources space. you can download a rig.

Ian Jacobson:

The camera move is distracting.

Tiffany Davern:

Interesting approach with no lip sync. I like it. The only thing I would say to improve is make the fingers a little less stiff. ^_^

Stephen Dahler:

nice work, you need to show the main character from the front

Mike Courtney:

floaty

Ashwani:

good