zhang fan:

ha,that is funny

Andrew:

character placement is bizarre. man's movements are strange.

deepak:

acting looks somewhat artificial to me. looks jerky in places. but nice try

Andre de Villiers:

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Alex:

i like the beginning animation of the guy, at the end seems too extreme/ not waranted by dialogue.. needs a lot of offsetting of body parts' motions so they dont hit on same frame.

Fernando Porcel:

NIce animation. The movements of the man distract and drag the atention to him, and the dialogue and emotions of the girl are a bit lost for that. Nice work. Cheers!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

make sure you have an idea of what the guy is doing.. i cant pick up what hes doing

Mike Courtney:

nice start, keep working on it and pay attention to the timing

Mayank:

you need lots of work to do.keep it up :)

asif:

the motions seems just pose to pose and seems that the computer has done the inbetweens need more work in arc followthrough and the spine seems to be very static of both the character. can do better.

Ashwani:

good

Stephen:

It looks good, however the camera angle seems odd. Maybe this is due to the lack of props. Mainly this just doesn't look finished (partly due to the Heads Up Display elements). But it also seems unfinished based on some of the movements. Seems like his movements are upstaging her dialog.

Zee Myers:

i don't get what he's doing before he speaks...