Welcoma NewYork !

Final Rating: 2.13. Finished: 77 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Praveen Nagwanshi

Description: my first job as animator

Experience: none (first job)

Time taken: 3-4 days

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Jeffrey Lee:

Your characters are very stiff. Don't just animate the arms but the whole body. Moving the arms will cause the whole body to move. And watch those eyes. Make sure its clear who he's looking at. Hope that helps. Cheers and good luck.

Ken Rice:

good effort - however your charaters are very stifff. You need some strong poses and hold them for a bit; your main character is moving too much.

Traci Plagmann:

You have some nice ideas for gestures in there but the overall body is pretty stiff. Try to get more of the spine and lower body involved in the movement.

Steve Schultz:

The first thing I noticed was that the character in gray didn't move at all until his line. A little subtle animation, such as swaying or doing something with his arms would have helped. Otherwise, good job.

Lavendra Love:

good work of acting but your busstop in on the road

Andre de Villiers:

Needs weight. Try moving the hips of your characters...

San:

Goof effort.. practice.. timing arcs and overlap.

Fernando Porcel:

NIce animation. Maybe a more emotional and strong poses for the girl and more work on timing. Again, nice work! Cheers!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

unfinished

Yasmin:

The spine needs to move more and not as stiff.

Stephen Dahler:

not bad!! you need some movements in the hips/pelvis area... keep up the good work

Mike Courtney:

work on lip sync

Ashwani:

nice keep it up

Zee Myers: