welcome to wonderful new york

Final Rating: 4.17. Finished: 31 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Jordan Lukrich

Description: new york is scary, but you get used to it.

Experience: 1.5 years

Time taken: about a week

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Michael Cawood:

It's a bit floaty in places. I'm not quite sure what the knife in the back gag is about either. Perhaps that could have done with some more thought.

John Sheffield:

Oh, so cynical. :) Fun idea!

Andy Hass:

haha, good reveal.

Leon Dexter:

Lol, I don't know why they both have knives in their backs but I liked it.

Barnabas Boehler:

just curious...are both these characters dead? Or have they both merely been "Backstabbed" ?

C. Ben Snell:

Made me smile. But his reaction seemed a little too early, I had too much time to be confused.

thomas reardon:

Great comic idea, I love how you reveal the knives as the punchline. Just tone down the over dramatic arcs in her movements just a bit.

Charles H:

great idea with the knives in the back

doc:

funny, - she is moving slow in deliverance of lines

Ken Rice:

Funny - nice timing on the end gag. Bit floaty though - could do with some snap.

Cameron Huber:

haha! To be honest I didn't get the knife gag the first time around, until I watched it a second time and saw hers. Initially I thought someone had stabbed him as he sat there... so i guess my main crit would be to sell that reaction from him more clearly. Perhaps have him do a double take and lean forward, clearly looking behind her. Be careful of the transitions between your poses being a little floaty - mainly in the woman.

natalie:

I laughed. Funny situation, funny characters.

Mariah:

Haha! Funny concept!! :D

Lavendra Love:

poor work

Raasi N:

Nice posing and animation.Timing is good.
Good work.

David Lochhead:

nice gag!

Jonathan Asselin:

I find it too violent, sorry. Excellent animation though! I really like the attitude of the cop! :D

Kay Ma'Ani:

Why is there a knife, stabbed into the back of the police officer?

Plus Lip Sync is bad! but good job!

Brian Bredehoeft:

To much Floating. But good poses.

Gregory Marlow:

funny

Mike Courtney:

even though female's feet are off screen, the timing of their movements need work

Kenny Roy:

Swimmy a bit in the spines. A little more pose to pose approach would be beneficial.

Omri Navot:

The knives are really clever. Good idea. The shot could use better staging so we might be able to connect better with the characters.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice!
Her movement can be a bit snappier, feels a little bit floaty at times.

Ashwani:

nice

Indrajit Deashi:

I liked the gag

Mark Persson:

Ha ha ha... love the good idea! The knife thing, but the anim needs more work on it.
You could zoom in a bit, easier to see most of it. more work on the face expression and the lipsync.

Keep up with good work!

eejun:

hahah. backstab! good anim too.