welcome to wonderful new york
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Michael Cawood:
It's a bit floaty in places. I'm not quite sure what the knife in the back gag is about either. Perhaps that could have done with some more thought.
John Sheffield:
Oh, so cynical. :) Fun idea!
Andy Hass:
haha, good reveal.
Leon Dexter:
Lol, I don't know why they both have knives in their backs but I liked it.
Barnabas Boehler:
just curious...are both these characters dead? Or have they both merely been "Backstabbed" ?
C. Ben Snell:
Made me smile. But his reaction seemed a little too early, I had too much time to be confused.
thomas reardon:
Great comic idea, I love how you reveal the knives as the punchline. Just tone down the over dramatic arcs in her movements just a bit.
Charles H:
great idea with the knives in the back
doc:
funny, - she is moving slow in deliverance of lines
Ken Rice:
Funny - nice timing on the end gag. Bit floaty though - could do with some snap.
Cameron Huber:
haha! To be honest I didn't get the knife gag the first time around, until I watched it a second time and saw hers. Initially I thought someone had stabbed him as he sat there... so i guess my main crit would be to sell that reaction from him more clearly. Perhaps have him do a double take and lean forward, clearly looking behind her. Be careful of the transitions between your poses being a little floaty - mainly in the woman.
natalie:
I laughed. Funny situation, funny characters.
Mariah:
Haha! Funny concept!! :D
Lavendra Love:
poor work
Raasi N:
Nice posing and animation.Timing is good.
Good work.
David Lochhead:
nice gag!
Jonathan Asselin:
I find it too violent, sorry. Excellent animation though! I really like the attitude of the cop! :D
Kay Ma'Ani:
Why is there a knife, stabbed into the back of the police officer?
Plus Lip Sync is bad! but good job!
Brian Bredehoeft:
To much Floating. But good poses.
Gregory Marlow:
funny
Mike Courtney:
even though female's feet are off screen, the timing of their movements need work
Kenny Roy:
Swimmy a bit in the spines. A little more pose to pose approach would be beneficial.
Omri Navot:
The knives are really clever. Good idea. The shot could use better staging so we might be able to connect better with the characters.
Andre de Villiers:
Nice!
Her movement can be a bit snappier, feels a little bit floaty at times.
Ashwani:
nice
Indrajit Deashi:
I liked the gag
Mark Persson:
Ha ha ha... love the good idea! The knife thing, but the anim needs more work on it.
You could zoom in a bit, easier to see most of it. more work on the face expression and the lipsync.
Keep up with good work!
eejun:
hahah. backstab! good anim too.









Animator: Jordan Lukrich
Description: new york is scary, but you get used to it.
Experience: 1.5 years
Time taken: about a week