New York

Final Rating: 4.11. Finished: 32 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Sachin

Description: She got some problem in her bicycle. She is alone and no one’s there to help her, so she tries to explain this to a guy. Guy helps her and at last she smile.

Experience: 5 Years

Time taken: 5 Days, 4 Hours a day

Comments:

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Andy Hass:

The lips are just moving and seem to have no relation to the line, looks like it's been dubbed from another language. Your body animation is decent, but you can bring it to a higher level - still seems to be in a rough stage.

C. Ben Snell:

Good start. Like the set up.

Mark Persson:

Good work and a great idea .... but it needs more work on it...

Keep up with the good work!

David Higgins:

Lip sync seemed off

Ashwani:

good

Lavendra Love:

picking nail action not good

Raasi N:

Good work.

Alex:

cool! i feel if he takes the nail out on "yiah hah!" and looks at it, that action could be more obvious.. (missed it the first time i watched). very nice!!!

Brian Bredehoeft:

I like the animation. Im not sure the pose with the arm out is a good choice and the lip synch needs work.

Chris Burel:

I want to think he sabotaged her bicycle, but I'm not really sure what happened.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! Good use of props. The lipsync is totally off on the girl. Rework the pose on "nobody's been.." - The outstretched arm seems out of place with what she's saying.

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync needs work

Kenny Roy:

A little melodramatic with her 2nd to last pose, though it's animated well. So you've got the technical skill, I just think you are capable of a stronger pose choice.

Tim Lobes:

Good animation but lipsync is off on female