New York-Not Everyone Welcome
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Barnabas Boehler:
haha I get it...it's because she has Boston Red Sox stuff...very clever.
Matt Boehm:
Ha! I see those pedicabs everyday near Fenway...I like the Sox fan in New York as her the reason everyone is mean to her. Animation wise its a great start. Needs some more polish though.
Ken Rice:
good effort - lip sync needs attention.
Lavendra Love:
nice job good background good handling of concept but bad camera work
Christiaan Moleman:
I think you need to slow down the big move on the bounce, because it feels way too snappy right now.
Around 320, I don't think you could make that big of a head move without moving the body.
Ian Jacobson:
Her jerk is too much!
Brian Bredehoeft:
Love the idea. LOVE IT! The timing is off though.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
lip sync is alittle off
Tiffany Davern:
I like the creativity on this! It tells a story ^^
Good job with the lip sync also. It seemed a tiny, tiny bit off in parts of Jezzell's voice, but that's minor.
Andre de Villiers:
The box is sliding against the force of the cart!? shocking
Mike Courtney:
work on lip-sync and arcs
Mark Persson:
Nice idea, but needs more work on it though... the body movement are good, but the lipsync are to slow and not completely synced.
The bump on the road happends to fast. i notice that she is flying up to early. Wait a couple of frames... until the wagon are going down! And make here melt with the wagon litle bit before she goes away, like you did with the fall.
Keep up with good work!
Ashwani:
nice but i think that lip sinc is not correct.
Andrew:
lip sync needs a lotta work









Animator: Alex
Description: first project submitted here... still wip..
Experience: 2 yrs school
Time taken: 20 hrs so far.