shruti:

avoid twinning

jodie:

Pretty good overall. The first thing that I think would improve the shot is if the character would be looking at each other, especially the girl. The guy is not listening at the girl from the beginning and is doing his own thing before he acknowledges her. If he was already listening to her, maybe by her side that would work since she would already be aware of his presence. I like that you are moving the guy character around, not just staying in one place, but it feels like he is going a little to pose to pose. The beginning of him is some really nice animation until he fininshes his step and he freezes. I think I see what you are trying to do. He freezes when he realizes the girl is talking to him. That's cool he can do that but if you followed thru with the momentum that he has and then went into a hold, it would work much better. I also don't get the idea in his face when he notices the girl since he is already looking at the girl. Maybe a slight take would help. The "welcome to New York" pose is awkward and getting into the last pose is not working and there need to be alittle weight on his body. Try opening up his left hand up. From the grill to the last pose it doesn't open up much.

Jesse Colucci:

Cool. One small thing - you could probably make the blinks faster.

Ken Rice:

Nice set up/render - female feels a little static though (especially her legs) I feel her movements don't match the soundtrack.

Bill Zebleckis:

Needs to acknowledge the character is even there. better lip sync technique needed. keep it up though

Cole Lemke:

I get the feeling that she is talking to her self or someone off screen. I think if you had the female make eye contact with the male or some other form of obvious acknowledgment it would build a better understanding of the conversation.

Mariah:

She seems a little too laid back for the voice. Also, it might help if she looks at him at least once.

Lavendra Love:

to whom she is talking about her problem and there no relation between two characters;
you have uses loose poses several times

Fernando Porcel:

Nice animation.
She never made visual contact with the man. Lacks a bit on staging and composition for the shot. Nice work. Cheers!

Stephen Dahler:

good job, id probably have the pink girl look at him more, that may require a camera angle change to help that. good job

Santiago Montenegro:

Good lighting

Mike Courtney:

the male is unnaturally still at points

Sunny Kharbanda:

The acting's not very clear to me. Though the characters are so close by, they lack a connection. The woman's acting in itself could be clearer.

Andre de Villiers:

Took me a second to figure out who was talking, lose the teeth, it's hiding half your lipsync! You can turn it off on the rig. Your holds are static, try subtle moving holds and work on your eases.

deepak:

lipsing looks weak in compearision to the aimaton.

Ashwani:

nice