Welcome to New York
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Jesse Colucci:
Good job. The guy's body looks a bit stiff though and the movements are a bit floaty, but overall good job!
Michael Shin:
Nice setting and concept! But, you need to have more keys. For now, I can see the tweening of both chracters.
Andy Hass:
It's funny that he would sit there and listen to her plea just to toss her a sarcastic quip before zooming off. I guess maybe the light just changed, eh?
jodie:
Cool animation man! I like the poses you have. Alot of moving from the poses is a bit floaty though. Your keys are great, you just have to get into those poses alot faster. I would watch hands when they are together that are slowly floating apart. .Also the first step into the scene doesn't have much weight to it. You do a At the end you might want to have the character go into the smile sooner.
And lastly, you do a good job at keeping the secondary character movements subtle, although the second head turn is really even timing, but you are going to want to push his poses and timing alittle when he takes since the focus of the scenes shifts to him now.
Mariah:
I really didn't think anyone would take the "princess" route. :(
Lavendra Love:
so many shaking in acting characters not moving they are sliding
Alex C:
The slower movements of the girl are appropriate I feel as she should be a little tired. I think she smiles too broadly at the end and her eyes look a little off. Nice touch with the guy driving off, his lack of concern is portrayed well.
Ken Rice:
good effort - very floaty though - you need some strong poses and some snap to your animation.
Andre de Villiers:
not bad, a little floaty, but nice
Mark Persson:
Good work! Could maybe zoom in a bit more so could it be easier to see the lipsync.
Keep up with good work!
Pete Shand:
The hips and the shoulders are pretty dead for the actions she's making, think about how weight and gravity will affect her body.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
the face needs work.. she didnt have much expression.. the lips would just snap which wasnt good
Mike Courtney:
nice work
Tim Lobes:
Good poses but too floaty
Kenny Roy:
A little undercooked, though I like how you picked up on some of the gasps and breaths in the dialogue. Listen closely like this with everything you do, it will serve you.
Omri Navot:
good staging. the animation is kinda floaty.
Ashwani:
nice
Joan Delmont:
All girl's move are to slow...
Jonathan Gonçalves:
i not get the scene but, needs a bit of more work..









Animator: Andrion Becker
Description: a naive girl lost in the big apple bothers chum waiting for a red light
Experience: 5 years at Digipen Institute of Technology
Time taken: probably around 40 hours for the animation, and a bit longer for everything else