Jeffrey Lee:

Very funny. I see that there's some popping things going on. I don't know if you added that on purpose but if you didn't you might want to look at your graph editor. If you did than it needs to be more clear. Cheers and good luck.

Cameron Huber:

The concept isn't too bad but the timing often feels pretty floaty and I noticed a few parts of the lip shapes not being in sync. Watch out for the head snaps in the beginning, and try to speed up your transitions, engage in some moving holds to fix those floating issues. Other than that, good effort!

Ashwani:

good

Andrew:

some nice poses here and there (when the dude thinks he's gonna get stabbed). not bad

Lavendra Love:

not proper justice with dialogs nothing is matching with action

Christiaan Moleman:

Your silhouette on the girl at the start could be better. I wasn't sure what was sticking out of her back, then realized it was her left elbow. I'd bring that out so you can see it to the side of the character.

160 also a bit of a muddled pose (on the guy)...

Overall I think you've got some nice stuff going on but you need to work on the readability of your poses.

sharad kumar:

idea is good but improve on the animation(acting part)

Brian Bredehoeft:

Great switch on the rols there.

Stephen Dahler:

nice!!! the camera cuts are a little awkward but solid movements

Tiffany Davern:

LMAO! Very nice!

deepak:

jerk in some places are noticeable. and the camera cut looks disturbing. could've given a single camera.

Joe Eagar:

the characters could do with being different in some way, perhaps different colors. also, the cuts need work, the one with the knife swipe doesn't really read at all, for example; it's very jarring.

Mike Courtney:

good work

Ben Harper:

weird. Im not sure if the knife works, it just seems out of place. I don't think the tone of the lip sync suits the context you set your animation in. not a bad effort though.

Andre de Villiers:

The second cut happens in the middle of an action, something you should probably avoid.. Animation seems a bit floaty.