Just as anybody

Final Rating: 4.93. Finished: 12 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Alberto

Description: A tipical situation of incomunication on modern life

Experience: 7 years

Time taken: 10 days

Comments:

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Sean Burgoon:

Good use of the prop. The homeless guy seemed a little weaker (his motions didn't quite feel believable) but overall good job!

Andy Hass:

lip-sync is a little over-exaggerated. i like the close-up on the guy.

C. Ben Snell:

Good start. Not sure of her reaction to bum.

doc:

nice expression on the woman's face.

Ken Rice:

nice animation - good lipsync and staging.

Barnabas Boehler:

Cool work!

I'm not sure if she should hold the reciever so far from her face at 48...but not too bad overall

Lavendra Love:

poor background and loose acting

Mark Persson:

Nice idea!

Keep up with good work!

Alex:

very cool.. not sure about the left hand 'very far' gesture (looks like 'wax-on wax-off' or smth..) , but very nice animation overall!

Olivier Ladeuix:

make sure the guy at the back is a bit more alive. At first I thought he was dead. He could do a bit of business like drinking a beer or eaves dropping

The left hand motion on "wondering" seems a bit overanimated, I think you could simplify this.

I like what you are doing for her eyes.eyebrows but the lips don't look very feminine especially on the "Nobody has been very nice to me"

Good idea with the hair readjustement on the guy but you could have gone for something much simpler by having him adjust his hat instead

Great effort

Chris Burel:

The mouth shapes need a lot of work

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! Some lipsync issues on ur 'w' 'v' and 'f' shapes. Slight stagger on the laugh, try smooth it out a bit. Overall it reads well.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Kenny Roy:

Good timing, nice beats, a little over done in some places, and undercooked in others, but very consistent. A few more polish passes and this could go on a reel.

natalie:

The idea is better than the animation itself but weldone.

asif:

Could have been better the character behind seems to have no motion in the start. overall nice work.

Ashwani:

nice