Jeffrey Lee:

I like your idea! Really funny. And your animation is really smooth which I like. I think you need to start thinking about who your character is and make that more clear. She's doing all these poses which serves no purpose in telling me who she is. Before animating stop and think about what your character is thinking.

Andy Menter:

Okay...this is the first one with a gun that has been funny in any way so far!
Thanks!

chakravarma:

i like it very much

Leon Dexter:

Haha, nice, Not sure about some of the hand movements though, a bit pose to pose too.

Andy Hass:

I like that last reaction.

Andrion Becker:

The pose on 190 isn't really working for me

natalie:

Very expressive!!!

Andrew:

nice interpretation. good animation

venkatesh:

ok fine acting is fine ok jaw movement has not good pleasese you have to improve character jaw movement . and animation have a smoth fine

Lavendra Love:

good use of characters but not matching

Andre de Villiers:

Pretty cool! Try to avoid repeating hand gestures. I felt some of the poses could be pushed a bit further, and the transition between poses (particularly after "..New York..") seemed quite linear.

sharad kumar:

Gud Idea!

Jonathan Asselin:

I find it too violent, sorry. Good animation though! :D

Alejandro Rodriguez:

Hey Dude good animation. I do feel like the body language is a bit calm for the tone of the dialogue. I also think the lipsync needs some work

Parker Simmons:

I'm not sensing the desperation in the character that I hear in the voice.

Ryan King:

I like the animation. It is animated and has character. But her beginning bit doesn't sell it for me. She looks like she's trying to deal something. Suggesting that she wants a gun or to "help." But the tone of the dialogue doesn't work with it. I think everything else you did works. That hand off of the gun and her payoff expression. But the beginning part just doesn't Jive to me. I have a feeling it's supposed to be like a convo in a room that is supposedly wire tapped and she is saying one thing but implying another. But It just doesn't read that way with the voice. For me at least. Good job though.

Pete Shand:

the mouths are getting a little lost with the tilt on the heads, would be nice to have them more visible

Joe Eagar:

poses could use a little work, I think.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Omri Navot:

clever!

Mayank:

Nice Work,u done well.but would make lipsing more clear.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Very good effort! I wish I could see more of her face.. it was a bit distracting for me that her mouth was so hard to see.

asif:

Nice body motions and gestures but the lipsync could be have been improved improved. Its seemed as as if lips and jaw has been restricted upto some particular motion.

Ashwani:

nice