Drive Thru in New York?
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Chris Sullivan:
clever idea
Mike Hoffman:
Very clever idea. Funny stuff.
shruti:
unique idea. nice animation!
Andy Hass:
I like your staging a lot.
C. Ben Snell:
Good idea. Would of liked to see the standee more clearly.
Steve Schultz:
Great concept!!
Brian Bredehoeft:
Looks good. Lip synch needs work
David Higgins:
I would have rated it higher but found the drive through bits on the right o the screen very distracting.
Julien Abenhaim:
good job, loved the facials :)
Cameron Huber:
Too much movement, especially during the second cut. The setup and gag are pretty sweet, you just need to focus on smoothing out those breakdowns and having more pauses. Keep at it, polish her up and this will be wicked!
Barnabas Boehler:
Cool!
That's pretty orignal! I haven't seen anything like that yet.
I like the startled look and her blinks at the end! Great stuff...keep it up!
Mariah:
Cute idea!
Santiago Arellano:
I love her gesture at the end, caricatured and sweet.
The drive through idea is good, but theres some polis you could do, especially at the beginning, it feels a little bit fast than needed, just a little bit.
On a side note, making the character grab their arm like when your character says "nobody" is very cliche, try to look for real things that real people do and caricature them into your animation.
Andrew:
haha, nice!
Raasi N:
Good Job.Very nice acting.The performance and dialog works really well.
Jon Mummery:
I really like this piece! Totally different from many of the others I've seen and a great interpretation of the audio. My only small crit is that her legs and knees pop slightly, mostly when she says 'nice to me'. Her expression at the end is really great. Also i love the way she plays with her finger at the 'help' part at the start, for me it shows you have really great posing skills.
Lavendra Love:
good use of character and improve your lighting its very bad
Alex:
hahahaha.. very funny. great job on the surprised look at the end... i think the whimper afer "help" can be used nicely here.. (maybe a smaller surprise to something she sees?)
Jonathan Asselin:
Good!!!
Excellent idea!!
She seems a little "wobbly" overall though... Very nice ending! :D
Stephen Dahler:
nice work!!!
Curtis:
The reaction is GREAT on the last cut! I totally didn't expect it!
Hips need some work. All movements should fire at the hips. even if it's just a little. And the hips never move on just one axis. it shoudl rotate, and translate on all three axis.
Nice performance! Keep it up!
Andre de Villiers:
nice! Lipsync needs some tweaking. Clean up up poses.
Mike Courtney:
nice work
Kenny Roy:
Cute idea. Get her taking steps, and hitting beats stronger with working the screen space.
Tim Lobes:
great! Is that the pope? :D
natalie:
I assume others like her more than I do.
Fernando Porcel:
Nice and funny approach, I liked. Cool work . Cheers!
Ashwani:
nice
Paul Blais:
not bad...
Santiago Montenegro:
Funny Idea!









Animator: Pete Shand
Description: A confused lady asks a drive thru sign for help.
Experience: No professional experience.
Time taken: About 4 days on and off.