David Alvarez:

Hey good job I think the audio will need more content animation.

chakravarma:

i like the settles in this one.there is scope for improving staging

snehangshu:

good idea..good job

Ken Rice:

Really nice animation - good moving holds - I like the concept and the ending was very good. Only thing I found a little strange was when the bunny puts its hand on her shoulder (mid point of animation): it doesn't bend its arm.

Tash:

I enjoyed your animation for its imaginativeness as well as your good animation skills- Really cool!!

Chris Sullivan:

cool idea

Andy Hass:

Heh, kinda like Hobbes, huh? I really like the moment just after "Thank you" when she's smiling at him.

Matt Boehm:

Ha love that surprise ending. Overall pretty great. Maybe a little to much movement if that makes sense. Good job.

Charles H:

made me laugh, good job

Steve Schultz:

I like the concept a lot.

SamoRa G:

i love the movement of the hair, nice idea 2 =D

Jeff:

Cool

doc:

has a nice feel to it

Mariah:

Oh man! That's funny!! Just when you see the edge of the skyline, and you're about to think "Hey dude, the edge of your plane is showing!" you see that it's a poster! NICE! :)

Nick Hales:

very nice work. Especially the hair playing as a 2ndary trick

Michael Cawood:

Nicely done. Good idea too.

Robert Grimard:

The idea it great and original i just feel that the girl is moving a bit too much on the Help.

Jonathan Asselin:

Very good!!!!
I really like the idea! I was surprised!

There's maybe a little too much hair going on, with the double hand move stroking the hair back... it gets confusing with the bunny ears. Also, I'm not sure of the cut at "(...) and I'm afraid". You could've just let the camera be, still framing the two characters...

The last cut before the establishing shot and the revealing of the surprise is really original! We see that's a poster, but I didn't quite get it the first time, maybe a more obvious tape on the corner?

Overall, it's very original, way to go!!! :D

Alex:

nice reveal! i really like the hair clearing gesture!!! esp how she fails to do it and then flicks it with hear head.. beautiful..

Brian Bredehoeft:

Fantastic! love the secondary motion.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

i like the hair moving around and her fixing it for secondary action.. makes it look so much better.. good job

Kenny Roy:

Great job. My suggestion to improve would be to calm down those large gestures in the beginning like moving the hair, and put that energy back in emphasising the large beats in the dialogue.

Yasmin:

I really like the story that was told. The extra animation that was the "punchline"

Curtis:

Heh, great reveal gag!

Hair was flopping like crazy though. Felt like it had a weight hanging from it or something. Heair movemnt is very subtle.

I like the timing and the acting.

Keep it up!

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Ben Harper:

really nice animation on the girl, the hair drooping down came off really well. It does feel a little over acted however. Im not too sure on the rabbit either, I think if you had gone with a different character and animated it as well as the girl, you might be better off. Nice work though.

Mark Persson:

Love it! The feeling of Alice in Wonderland! Great end... Great movement for both the girl and the rabbit... it feels that they are alive both of them separately. Great lipsync... dont know if it just my computer but it feels that the sound and lipsync are not complete together.....

Great work!

jodie:

Awesome animation! I love when she pulls her hair out of the way. Great. The only thing I would say that popped out to me was the match cut issue between shot 3 and 4. The rabbit should still have his hand on her. And I feel like the Thank you line could be pushed a bit, maybe a slight antic in there. And I don't think I would delay the eye blink by 2 frames. Maybe by 1 frame if you don't want them to tween but it shouldn't feel like 2 separate moves. Great little piece though.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice!

deepak:

nice try with the hair but all over it is really distracting the acting and scene. maybe too much movement. she speaks out " help" prety late. otherthann that everything looks cool, hands and acting looks really good

Ashwani:

good

Joan Delmont:

excellent !!

Andrew:

great overlapping animation. nice interpretation as well. why is the bunny so big at first though

Ben Hatton:

Two bits really stood out for me - the way she pushes the rabbit near the start, and how she has to push her hair back behind her ear twice. Nice movements.