Ashwani:

good

Tash:

Really enjoyed the animation idea -very cool

thomas reardon:

Her transitions are too violent and fast, there are alot of nice poses though.

Andrion Becker:

haha looks like our ideas for this shot were pretty similar. It looks pretty good but I'm not sold on that step on frame 30, also the lip sync needs some work

Steve Schultz:

I really like the cops expressions. Great job!!

Brian Bredehoeft:

Love the concept!

Jeff:

Bad Officer! Bad!!

Philip Mc'nRoe Rakesh:

nice use of composition!!

ROMI S PAL:

NICE gag

Raasi N:

A very nice piece of animation overall.Good staging and shots.The acting of girl looks syncs well with the dialog.The cop works well too.
This is one of my favorite entries for June 08'.

Lavendra Love:

good acting and car running without road

Ken Rice:

Good animation - didn't like the colour choice of your female though - it made her less important to look at (her hair being the same color as her body - to keep things consistant the policeman's hat should have really been all light green).
The female character seems rooted to the same spot.

Jamie Jannaway:

Some of the poses were a bit stiff, Lip synch needs more work, try to keep your characters moving, they stopped a couple of times.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! i like the cartoony style! Some of the poses seem a bit strange, but at least they're interesting and original! The lipsync on "..been very nice to me.." is off, fix it and you'll have a great peace!

Amdbcg:

I like the ending - the secondary character is really played up :P

Jonathan Asselin:

Perfect timing! :D
The only thing I see is the laughing part of the second character, we can't feel it that much and I don't know if the cut is necessary... Everything else is just superb!!

Alex:

very cool.. (sweet police cruiser too).. i think she freezes a bit on "help" and his index finger pointed as he moves the left hand inside the car is slightly confusing..
all in all, really really nice!!!

Ian Jacobson:

I'm not seeing the word 'well' (as in 'yeah well, welcome...').

Olivier Ladeuix:

a bit overacted for my liking, very good effort

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the lip sync.. i think you missed a word there.. the very seemed to not be there.. you can also finesse this alittle more.. but good moements and poses

Brad Regier:

Fun shots!
Composition: maybe kind of strange how she moves into the car's shape at "help"?
Good going!
bR

Mike Courtney:

work on lip sync, consider foot placement and weight on the female

Tim Lobes:

Good animation but a little too much going on

Omri Navot:

nice job!

Fernando Porcel:

Nice animation and nice facial expressions. Like a lot the policeman expressions.
I think the donnut action dont reads clearly, and after the sarcastic phrase the woman change the expression to angry as if she had understood the sarcasm, and then change again to an innocent expression. That is a bit confuse.
Nice work. Cheers!

deepak:

lipsing looks great!. but the body looks toomuch soft like a rubber( broken backbone) could decrease the curve in body. expression and acting is nice though.

Guo WenZHeng:

I like it.

Joan Delmont:

good animation of a hysteric girl !

Kent Wong:

the poses are arkward...and unnatural , even though it's cartoon. Just look weird overall ...
i guess u r trying hard to tell the personality and characteristic of the girl (u must have over-done it), but even after watching 5 times, i still dont get what she was intending to do, or rather what she is thinking.. ... is she trying to fool the police? is she really really lost and need help? Poses and facials are all very confusing...
For example, from the beginning, her facial seems worried and so "drama", then frame 225, she showed unpleasant facial, by staring the police (perhaps she was unhappy that the police wasnt helpful or whatever reasons), and then ending she ended up saying "thank you" with smily and appreciating-face aroud frame 268 till the end. Overall poses, facial, and story setup really very confusing
sorry to be so direct, just my personal view. Despite all above, animation (body mechanic) is not bad overall.
All the best in Animation Mentor. :)

Ben Hatton:

Great acting, and the green guy has great funny expressions. Let down by some lip sync on "very nice".