Harry met Sally

Final Rating: 3.71. Finished: 42 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Indrajit Deashi

Description: Traveling a long way from home, Sally’s car broke, smashed a trash-can. Security guy wont spare her. Helpless in a new city, she bumped onto Harry, casually walking back home after a movie. That’s how they met. That’s The Beginning.

Experience: 8 years

Time taken: 13 days after regular job work

Comments:

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Wes Storhoff:

Haha I like it, but for some reason I feel very disturbed by the ending.

Mark Persson:

Good work and great idea!

Keep up with the good work!

Cameron Huber:

I felt it was a little jarring to have the angry guy on screen as soon as the guy in red began speaking. Be careful of acting choices feeling too linear, as in they're just switching from one to another. An example would be from frames 120 - 175. Add more holds and breakdowns to help with this. Good start, keep going!

David Higgins:

Nice acting choices but it just lacked some snap.

Lavendra Love:

policeman in story is impressive

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! Work on your breakdowns a little more, seems a bit linear still.

Alex:

cool.. i think the mustached guy's closeup could be more menacing if thats your intention.

Kenny Roy:

Slow down!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

scary

Mike Courtney:

bit floaty at points

Tim Lobes:

Lip sync seems off, could be codec

natalie:

Good effort, indeed.

Sunny Kharbanda:

A different background color would help this scene.. large parts of you characters' silhouettes are getting lost, which is somewhat distracting. Good effort on the expressions and trying to tell a story.

deepak:

lipsing looks loose and lost. expression in the thin guy loos linear . the finger overlaps are nice.

Ashwani:

nice work

Andrew:

not sure what's going on, but not bad