NiceGuy
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Zee Myers:
I like the 2nd guy and the "thank you"; the beginning line, the acting is too floaty and overall the lip sync is off.
Manuel Bover:
Good job, but for she the voice suggest more intensity in the facial expressions and in the body language.
Barnabas Boehler:
Hey.!
Pretty good, but I think perhaps her hands are moving too much. I think you should try to have some moving holds (where the hands are in a held position...but not completely dead..moving slightly) Also, I don't she needs to cover her face with her hands
Ashwani:
good
Jeff:
Hand gestures seem too much.
Lavendra Love:
background stage and action is not matching
Raasi N:
Good posing and performance.
Ken Rice:
good effort - animation is very floaty though - background is a bit too busy I think.
Andre de Villiers:
nice, lipsync needs tweaking.
Alejandro Rodriguez:
Good Job man. I'd pay close attention to Screen Right Arm of the Girl character. It is just there... and from time to time you do something with it. This makes it looks very lifeless
Fernando Porcel:
Cool animation. Nice poses on it.
The man walking out after his answer put a cool note for the sarcastic answer. Nice work!
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
the girl was alittle floaty. good stuff though
Stephen Dahler:
nice, her torso is a bit floaty, if you find a driving force in each movement it will help the torso become weighted down
Chris Burel:
Lip sync seems off, and the gesture around frame 95 seems a bit mushy and unnatural.
Joe Eagar:
nice, though there's some floatyness going on in some parts.
Mike Courtney:
lip-sync needs work
Omri Navot:
The female character is very floaty
natalie:
She really doesnt match the voice in any way.
Mark Persson:
Good work... most of the movement, expressions and lipsync are good there are more still more work on it.
Averall... most av the body movement on the girl are to slow. The face expression are to happy all the time... need to show more what she is thinking and what she wants.
Dont forget it night!)
Keep up with good work!









Animator: Santiago Montenegro
Description: A woman looking for help in the big city
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 5 days