The stranger

Final Rating: 3.75. Finished: 41 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: MAN-E

Description: Looking for some help

Experience: 5-years

Time taken: 25-30 HRs

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Ashwani:

good work.

C. Ben Snell:

Whoa, where'd that come from?

Alonso Soriano:

a little posey. I'd like more of a sense of weight when holding a pose. Funny twist

Santiago Arellano:

Good effort, some of the body parts need to be offsetted so that they start and end in different times, it just looks more natural that way.

On the ideas: Well, so, the afterworld is called New York, the girl pulls a knife just for the sake of it, and the guy takes a solid step back at the end, even if he's floating and he's afraid of the knife even if he's already dead???

Hmmmm... I think sometimes we get carried away trying to do something original or unexpected and we animate crazy things that sometimes don't make sense, it sometimes work for a cheap laugh, but what's the purpose behind all the crazy stuff??

Jon Mummery:

Nice idea, but if they are going to be flying, it would be good to have a gentle bobbing up and down on them through out the scene. She has some nice poses though.

Mark Persson:

Very strange idea... but still quite good work.

Keep up with good work!

Andre de Villiers:

i don't get it.

Pete Shand:

lol interesting concept, i think u could have made it look a bit more floaty with smoother curves

Jonathan Asselin:

I find it too violent, sorry. Good animation though! :D

Olivier Ladeuix:

can't stand the knife/gun kind of end gags. Seen too many times

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

Wow!
This animation it's perfect!
Conglaturations!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

cool idea.. i dont like the camera cut though... it just doesnt look right

Kenny Roy:

Floating chars is a bit of a cheat. Could have been executed really well, but the bobbing wasn't utilized to its full potential. Unique approach though.

Paul Yan:

the camera cut was unnecessary

Gregory Marlow:

Wow I have no idea what just happened. A bumble bee angel pulls a knife on the guy to show her gratitude. I don't get it.

Mike Courtney:

good humor

Brad Regier:

Interesting (if weird) concept.
The first cut is a bit awkward, not different enough, camera "crosses the line"
A bit linear, needs some polish...
Good going.,

Omri Navot:

what? it doesn't make any sense.

Andrew:

not sure why she pulls out a knife while saying thank you

Joan Delmont:

I really don't understand your joke... Maybe because i'm french, but i'm not sure... ;-) The animation is not to bad.

Kent Wong:

creative, but "New York" in heaven? i dont think it works for me anyway... haha...