The stranger
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Ashwani:
good work.
C. Ben Snell:
Whoa, where'd that come from?
Alonso Soriano:
a little posey. I'd like more of a sense of weight when holding a pose. Funny twist
Santiago Arellano:
Good effort, some of the body parts need to be offsetted so that they start and end in different times, it just looks more natural that way.
On the ideas: Well, so, the afterworld is called New York, the girl pulls a knife just for the sake of it, and the guy takes a solid step back at the end, even if he's floating and he's afraid of the knife even if he's already dead???
Hmmmm... I think sometimes we get carried away trying to do something original or unexpected and we animate crazy things that sometimes don't make sense, it sometimes work for a cheap laugh, but what's the purpose behind all the crazy stuff??
Jon Mummery:
Nice idea, but if they are going to be flying, it would be good to have a gentle bobbing up and down on them through out the scene. She has some nice poses though.
Mark Persson:
Very strange idea... but still quite good work.
Keep up with good work!
Andre de Villiers:
i don't get it.
Pete Shand:
lol interesting concept, i think u could have made it look a bit more floaty with smoother curves
Jonathan Asselin:
I find it too violent, sorry. Good animation though! :D
Olivier Ladeuix:
can't stand the knife/gun kind of end gags. Seen too many times
João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:
Wow!
This animation it's perfect!
Conglaturations!
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
cool idea.. i dont like the camera cut though... it just doesnt look right
Kenny Roy:
Floating chars is a bit of a cheat. Could have been executed really well, but the bobbing wasn't utilized to its full potential. Unique approach though.
Paul Yan:
the camera cut was unnecessary
Gregory Marlow:
Wow I have no idea what just happened. A bumble bee angel pulls a knife on the guy to show her gratitude. I don't get it.
Mike Courtney:
good humor
Brad Regier:
Interesting (if weird) concept.
The first cut is a bit awkward, not different enough, camera "crosses the line"
A bit linear, needs some polish...
Good going.,
Omri Navot:
what? it doesn't make any sense.
Andrew:
not sure why she pulls out a knife while saying thank you
Joan Delmont:
I really don't understand your joke... Maybe because i'm french, but i'm not sure... ;-) The animation is not to bad.
Kent Wong:
creative, but "New York" in heaven? i dont think it works for me anyway... haha...









Animator: MAN-E
Description: Looking for some help
Experience: 5-years
Time taken: 25-30 HRs