City Shoes
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Chris Sullivan:
LMAO
Paul Holmes:
Hahaha, this was the first to make me laugh this hard. Really funny idea, I love how she jumps on top of the guy. The animation needs lots of work though.
Barnabas Boehler:
Hey...are you using Flash?
That's really cool to see some different styles of animation.
However, the tall character looks a little stiff and it would be nice to see some more flexibility in his spine when he's walking and getting jumped.
Also, what is the reaction he does around 190-200?
Still, great work...keep it up and I'm sure you'll improve with every new test!
Andy Hass:
Reminds me of "Married... with Children"
Stuart Taylor:
so funny
Bruno Camara:
UAHUAHUHAUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHAUHA, this should win
doc:
jerking - is that part of the animation?
Fernando Porcel:
Original and funny approach.
Needs a more inbetweens and breakdowns for a smooth motion and better timing. Some motions looks tweened.
Nice work :D Cheers!
Ashwani:
great man good idea
natalie:
Satirical cartoons! Very original style... it doesnt look like anything I ve seen so far. I like the characters - fine couple. I also appreciate the fact she "speaks" with a reason and that he s there with a reason. A clear story, distinctive characters, visual jokes. Weldone.
Andre de Villiers:
Hahaha, very funny!
Jon Mummery:
Bizarre - yet I thought it was funny!
Alex:
thats hilarious. holding her foot is funny..
Derek:
funny
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
haha..
Tiffany Davern:
Well, it's certainly not bad. However, your animation looks a bit stiff. Her hair especially. Try some in betweens. When a person walks they need to lift their feet. The part where she grabs her foot needs some in betweens as well. Also, when she jumps try a little squash and stretch. Squish her down a bit and then squish them when they land so it doesn't look like they just happed to fall down. It's a good start and has potential, so don't give up on animating, and I look forward to seeing you improve.
This looks like it was done in flash. If you need help with flash drop me an email and I'll see what i can do. ;)
Daria:
It's very funny :)
Curtis:
Haha. Funny skit. A little irrelavent. Could have been a little more appropriate for the line read. But never the less gave me a chuckle.
Gill Frank:
LOL WTF!!
Mike Courtney:
nice story, keep working at it
Mark Persson:
Ha ha ha... lovely the end !D I love the way of catroon, the simplicity.
But the anim needs more work... You have the basic movement keys, but it needs to smoothen out some. I cant bearly see the lipsync... maybe it could being zoomed in a bit from the beginning!
Keep up with good work!
Omri Navot:
If you put a little more work into this it could be very funny. You're headed in a good direction with the character design, now you need to work on your acting and animation.
Stephen:
While this seems like a very unique approach, it just seems like what's going on doesn't really fit the audio.









Animator: Barry Wheelbarrow
Description: The wrong shoes.
Experience: amateur
Time taken: right up to the deadline