City Shoes

Final Rating: 2.28. Finished: 74 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Barry Wheelbarrow

Description: The wrong shoes.

Experience: amateur

Time taken: right up to the deadline

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Chris Sullivan:

LMAO

Paul Holmes:

Hahaha, this was the first to make me laugh this hard. Really funny idea, I love how she jumps on top of the guy. The animation needs lots of work though.

Barnabas Boehler:

Hey...are you using Flash?

That's really cool to see some different styles of animation.
However, the tall character looks a little stiff and it would be nice to see some more flexibility in his spine when he's walking and getting jumped.

Also, what is the reaction he does around 190-200?

Still, great work...keep it up and I'm sure you'll improve with every new test!

Andy Hass:

Reminds me of "Married... with Children"

Stuart Taylor:

so funny

Bruno Camara:

UAHUAHUHAUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHAUHA, this should win

doc:

jerking - is that part of the animation?

Fernando Porcel:

Original and funny approach.
Needs a more inbetweens and breakdowns for a smooth motion and better timing. Some motions looks tweened.
Nice work :D Cheers!

Ashwani:

great man good idea

natalie:

Satirical cartoons! Very original style... it doesnt look like anything I ve seen so far. I like the characters - fine couple. I also appreciate the fact she "speaks" with a reason and that he s there with a reason. A clear story, distinctive characters, visual jokes. Weldone.

Andre de Villiers:

Hahaha, very funny!

Jon Mummery:

Bizarre - yet I thought it was funny!

Alex:

thats hilarious. holding her foot is funny..

Derek:

funny

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

haha..

Tiffany Davern:

Well, it's certainly not bad. However, your animation looks a bit stiff. Her hair especially. Try some in betweens. When a person walks they need to lift their feet. The part where she grabs her foot needs some in betweens as well. Also, when she jumps try a little squash and stretch. Squish her down a bit and then squish them when they land so it doesn't look like they just happed to fall down. It's a good start and has potential, so don't give up on animating, and I look forward to seeing you improve.

This looks like it was done in flash. If you need help with flash drop me an email and I'll see what i can do. ;)

Daria:

It's very funny :)

Curtis:

Haha. Funny skit. A little irrelavent. Could have been a little more appropriate for the line read. But never the less gave me a chuckle.

Gill Frank:

LOL WTF!!

Mike Courtney:

nice story, keep working at it

Mark Persson:

Ha ha ha... lovely the end !D I love the way of catroon, the simplicity.
But the anim needs more work... You have the basic movement keys, but it needs to smoothen out some. I cant bearly see the lipsync... maybe it could being zoomed in a bit from the beginning!

Keep up with good work!

Omri Navot:

If you put a little more work into this it could be very funny. You're headed in a good direction with the character design, now you need to work on your acting and animation.

Stephen:

While this seems like a very unique approach, it just seems like what's going on doesn't really fit the audio.