Jeffrey Lee:

You're animation is very smooth and I like that. But you need to rethink your acting choices and your poses. How she acts, doesn't feel real. Imagine this not being an animation but take your poses and put it on a real actor. Does it feel right? Cheers and Good luck.

Chris Sullivan:

I like it!

chakravarma:

Awesome man.dont know y this is good but i feel some inner feelings.might be u out your sole in this animation

snehangshu:

yah thats good..

Ken Rice:

Interesting WIP to watch - your animation turned out well. Would like to see the man in yellow framed better though, he's awkward to read.

Fernando Porcel:

NIce concept. I like the seat down action.
I think the other character seated perhaps should have tried to answer before being interrupted by the waiter.
The shot lacks a bit on composition with the second character a bit out of camera, but is areally cool work. Cheers!

Wes Storhoff:

Haha I like the waiter and his actions. Girl character seems a bit weightless though, the elbows come off the table maybe a bit too easily

Andy Hass:

The wink-gun seems a little forced to me, but that fact makes it kind of funny. Pretty good staging, though seeing half of the 2nd character the whole time is a bit distracting, especially since he/she isn't really animated right now.

Bill Zebleckis:

sound was a little ahead of mouth movement.

Ashwani:

good job

Lavendra Love:

lose background of cafe; good acting job nice to see

Jon Mummery:

This animation looks really great. The way you give the table some reaction is a neat touch. The twinning just before she puts her hands on the face could be offset slightly but otherwise a lovely piece!

Alex:

awesome! . the double gesture of the right hand on "tonight" looked a bit weird... (maybe one is enough?) but really great work.

Jonathan Asselin:

That's great!!!
The hand gesture on "(...)long tonight" is one rotation too much for me. I don't know about the setup, something is off. Maybe she could sit at the table and talk directly to the waiter? The third character is not necessary in my opinion. Maybe if the waiter would stay in the frame, you would've had more time to play with the animation of the glass mount and it's glass... But I REALLY like the sitting down part and the hands banging on the table, we can feel the contact! This is incredible!!! Keep it up!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

i like this

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Omri Navot:

nice! can you loosen up her spine a bit more?

Ben Harper:

I think the face needs more expression, the acting isn't too bad though. Its just that the face and body seem detached. If you push the key poses of the face a bit more, i think you will get a nice piece out of this.

Mark Persson:

Nice idea.. and good work on the girl. good movement, expression and lipsync. She feels alive! And a good end to it!
But the other character the waitress ...dosent work with lipsync and the voice. Something is completely wrong here with that character... need to work with that!

Keep up with good work!

asif:

Hey nice movements and quiet good lipsync, i would suggest just one thing is the way she bangs her hand on the table as per your scene situation i feel she shouldn't have had bang the hand on table, she looks irritated more than upset while she does that you could change it to some other motion may be sway her hand or something, overall nice work.

Andre de Villiers:

Nice!
Careful of repeating hand gestures, she does the same thing 3 times in a row, looks like you just copied the keys..
The guy in the foreground is getting lost and has no connection with her. The last guy isn't a very good waiter.. the tray-hand moves very staggery.

Guo WenZHeng:

nice!!
nice idea.

emmanuelle errera:

good idea and animation, well acted.
Just 1 thing: What that weird hand movement around frame118 ?