Finlay Goodall:

Very nice. I really like the hand gesture at the beginning

snehangshu:

no animation..nothing

Andy Hass:

I like your performance, you're getting some good expression out of ol' Hogan. I think you just need to take the body to a polished level now (start with the root and make sure your movements adhere to the principles like arcs, slow-in/slow-out, overlap, etc). Also take one more pass on the lips - the controls probably aren't the greatest but I'll bet you can get it a little cleaner.

Matt Boehm:

You execute her body language very well. A lot of people put time into their sets and back story but you just take the character acting and give us a fantastic performance. Execellent.

thomas reardon:

There is some really nice acting here. It needs some follow thru with some of her body motion.

Ken Rice:

nicely animated.

Jesse Colucci:

Great expressions. The only thing seems to be the eyeballs move really rapidly when she is saying "wandering very far and long". Awesome job though.

David Higgins:

Some gittering in the right hand and some of the lip sync appears off and the left hand isn't moving until the end but nice acting.

Andrew Linke:

Lip synching is a little off but I like the body language and the eye movements

Cameron Huber:

The acting choices are really nice, all the while maintaining that constant feeling of nervousness. I think some of the expressions in the face could have been clearer, mostly in the eyes/brow area. It would have been nice to see the guy in shot speaking as well. Very nice effort!

J Shaw:

good job on the body, but you could push the face animation a little more

Santiago Arellano:

I really like it, very nice work with all those little gasps, and the ending is very very cool, especially that little smile at the end! :D

venkatesh:

ok some fine but you have to improment facials and main jaw move ment

Brian Bredehoeft:

Good Poses

Sherif Nagib:

you have some very nice poses & good subtle moments. Wish you could've worked the composition somehow in order to makeup for the absence of the other character. Maybe an over-the-shoulder or something like that .

Simon Bean:

Ace! Took me a couple of watches to get over that voice coming out of hogan but I got past it in the end ;) Lovely sensitivity throughout the acting... really great job! Could have done with a cut to a second character (but you probably know that) The lipsync around "far and long" seems to drift and the 'f' of afraid doesn't quite hit. Overall though... really exceptional job! Hope you win :D

Alex:

great acting!.. maybe sync can have more mouth open shapes? like "help" could be more emphasized. very nice though.. esp loved the subtle hand/finger motions.

Jonathan Asselin:

Nice!
Maybe you could've pushed the feeling of panic a little more? Also, I would've liked to see a second character. I really like your weight shifts! Good work! :D

Kay Ma'Ani:

The Lip Sync is almost perfect......shame the concept wasnt as good as that.,.I think you would have made a excellent entry if you had focused as much effort to the concept as you did with the lip sync

Fabio da Silva Bispo:

Very gooooood !!!

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

The girl is not expressive, she is very calm!

Johnathan Scoon:

really nice work in the face... love the last expression... u nailed it

Kenny Roy:

There's a lot here that's great. I liked it when you picked up on some of the breathing, though I wish you got the big gasps in the beginning!!!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

good acting

Stephen Dahler:

nice job!!

Gregory Marlow:

Very nice emotions on the face. Needs a little polish but looking very good overall.

Andre de Villiers:

Great stuff! Looks a bit like you copied reference material, that can be a good thing or a bad thing.. in this case i think it works!

Mike Courtney:

the timing of the actions and the script could line up better

Tim Lobes:

Too much focus on everything instead of one thing. Hard to follow the acting

Daniel Huertas:

I love the work on the mouth shapes and lipsync... but you need better body poses or hit accents with shoulders or head...

good job! :)

Omri Navot:

excellent animation! Your character feels very alive. Now bring in some more interesting staging and story elements. And if you have time, animate the male character too.

kEViN:

I think you could've pushed the performance in the face more. It feels pretty lifeless. As for the body I think it works ok but try to focus on your arcs more. There seems to be some hiccups in your motion. Probably an issue you could address in the curve editor. That extra bit of polish will go a long way. Great effort though!

Mark Persson:

Very good work. good movement and good lipsync. The character feels alive.... nice to see a character sometimes blinking with there eyes....her reaction are good!

Could make the mouth open more when talking... something feels wrong with it... dont know what though...hmmm

Keep up with good work!

Andrew:

face animation and sync is quite good except for " nobody's been"

natalie:

I liked her(?) smile.

Kent Wong:

not bad...but facial is not expressive enough in my opinion. Play around with the eye brows will help on that. :)

Ashwani:

nice

Joan Delmont:

good animation, clean. A few boring, i'd like more funny move, but it's my advice...

Zee Myers:

Nice subtle movement! Really like the eye shifting...the character doesn't look like the voice at all, and yet you made it stick - kudos! Also like that even tho i don't see the second character, I never question where he is because of the acting.