Clayton Miller:

Good job! Still a bit floaty though.

Adam Levin:

I almost feel the entire thing would be better if you kept the screen left hand still for the entire piece. There is too much going on at present.

Deanna Bishop:

Great job. Good poses. The arms seem a little floaty. Keep the hand gestures simple and pronounced. Its looking really good!

Shahbaaz Shah:

Fun story point! Overall a tad bit floaty in the arm gestures towards the end.

Dan Dulberger:

The deep breat towards the end looks good air going in, but I lacked something as the air starts going out again. Shes momentarily put a lid on the air taken in when she took the deep breath, I think it should be more noticable when she takes that lid off, despite the fact that she lets go of the air slowly.

Michael Slater:

I like the hat and the character is cool.

Dwarakanath Jnaneswar Ekkirala:

i think you need to hit your poses and have moving holds rather than floaty arms and head. Other than that, may be some asymmetrical mouthshapes? and some head tips.. thats it. You have a nice sense of timing, i think.. but it needs to be nurtured. Keep working man! Good luck!

Hector Lopez:

I like the idea. The animation just seems to have too many random movements. I would try to match big movements with the dialogue. It'll look much cleaner.

Frank Collazo:

very good

Lauren Wells:

Cool stuff! What if instead of her ploping the hat back onto her head, maybe she doesn't look off screen left, but keeps the hat in her hands and stares at it resentfully/defeatedly. Keep it up!

Aaron Clement:

Inventive. I didn't pic it was a police hat until near the end, though.

Gregory Marlow:

not too bad.

Alonso Soriano:

Man Generi makes an ugly lady :D

I think this would be stronger if the hands were still. The head and body are doing decent emoting/accenting already, but since it's such a squat model the arms are in the same general area and waving around a lot and trying to demand attention, they're fair what they are doing but I think the performance would be stronger without. I think you need a little more variety in the mouth shapes.

-Alonso

John T. Coomey:

Because of the size of her hat you might have been better going with more subtle acting choices on that hand as it is a little distracting..

Virgil Mihailescu:

hahahaha, boy, is she sexy or what? :D
I think the hand gestures are a bit too generic. there is some weight in this animation, but overall, the acting could be more focused.

Taber Dunipace:

Animation is very floating throughout and the gestures are unnatural and awkward. No contrast of timing at all.

Robert Tighe:

hee hee nice hat.

Mike Courtney:

There should be some moving holds on your strongest poses.

Derek Mabson:

Very floaty w/ the hands and the hat seems to be a bit of a distraction to me as it floats around through the scene. I like the overlap w/ the hair and the acting choices are good.

Ryan King:

The beginning head movements I think are a little much. It seems too spastic. Not bad though.

Rico Lim:

I like how you added that she isn't happy being a cop. Nice.

Ryan Malm:

poses have "floating syndrome" It needs some holds, so the motion looks more polished.

luis veiga pumar:

body moves a lot, never seems to pause, and feels very floaty.

lipsync needs a bit of work, but a good start.

Christiaan Moleman:

I think you're moving the hands too much, while the body and feet don't really move at all. Maybe try focusing on one hand per gesture as sort of the "lead" hand and make the other less pronounced. Try and shift the hips around a bit while still making it feel like she's sitting...

Jett Atwood:

It's very floaty and the hat is distracting, especially at the beginning when it's hard to see what it actually is.