Dwarakanath Jnaneswar Ekkirala:

for me, theres a bit too much head movement.. and the gasp part could be smoother and less movement. Other than that.. good try with 2d.. refreshing. Rock oN!

Clayton Miller:

Yay 2D! Good job!

Ryan Hagen:

It looks like there's a bit missing from the gasp. I think with the time constraints you worked under the polish is about as far as you could've gotten. Good work.

Adam Levin:

This is the first version of this shot I've seen so far that captures the subtlety of the line. Right in the middle when she's breathing in, the character seems to have too many legs or something, but I'm sure that's just a clean up issue. Great job on this!

John T. Coomey:

Nice little Character.. Things start off well and it feels like the voice is coming from the character but after that it becomes a little disjointed. I like your choice for the last pose

Deanna Bishop:

Great job. Strong poses in there. I really like this character. Makes me want to see more.

Shahbaaz Shah:

Some really great stuff happening here. I would have liked to see it fill the screen. Hard to see all that's going on with the face at that size. Great work.

Brad Bradbury:

2d!

Eric Luhta:

Kudos for doing this in 2d. Good job overall, just some silhouette things that could be stronger. Also the breath, she compresses instead of expands which doesn't look right. But good effort with a difficult medium.

Frank Collazo:

good

Dan Segarra:

Great design for this audio. Ha ha, nice work.

Aaron Clement:

not bad

Tania Vincent:

I love this. Its an amazing creature and i love the weight in the cheek.

Nicole Blume:

Awesome job. It's great to see some 2D stuff and the gestures are pretty cool.

Kyle Mohr:

Pretty nice, good to see some 2D! I like her attitude, pretty expressive throughout, I just think you might have a little too much going on sometimes. Especially on the gasping part, you have a couple poses there when I think she really only needs one. Maybe hold just one pose on the gasp and hold it until the end when she settles down into resting on her hand.

Nice job though, keep up the hard work!

Gregory Marlow:

I like the last half a lot.

Jace Bandalin:

This is amazing! Aside from the fact that your drawing skills are incredible you've animated this character beautifully as well! Some of the motion feels just a little swimmy, but in my opinion you have nailed this one! Bravo!

Alonso Soriano:

technically well done. Head doesn't seem tied to the audio/acting, arm gestures don't really either. That long mouth is confusing the right side of the silhouette. It's a really cool piece, nice fleshiness to the hand on cheek, good job keeping volumes and flow and all that, but I think the performance could be stronger.

-Alonso

Christiaan Moleman:

Sweet! Think you could have maybe had a bit more intensity in the eyes, given the tone of the line, but otherwise really nice work.

P Walters:

Wow, 2d... well done.

Virgil Mihailescu:

hahahaahaaahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa, this is really cool, really funny!! see, now here is the difficulty of comparing - 3D animation is way more detailed and every little wrong accent jumps at you... while with this animation here, you only get more of an impression (the breathing though is visibly strange, after "I'm living", it's an interrupted gesture). anyway, it looks very nice, the poses and the face are really expressive and I love the idea!!

Taber Dunipace:

Gasp is the most awkward moment, where there's a double movement which is unreadible. "Life" gesture is very weak. Mostly an appealing and competent animation.

Mike Courtney:

The legs faded, so it looks a bit incomplete. Nice job otherwise.

Ryan King:

nice. very sketchy but it was nice

Ryan Malm:

I have to give this one props just for being 2d... and the character / situation imagined for the dialogue is hilarious! good performance

Eric Stirpe:

I'm a sucker for well-done 2-D animation, and this is in fact very nicely executed. The lip sync is really great, and I like the acting. I don't know why, but the movement of the legs bothers me though.. I feel like the legs are a little.. jumpy? other than that though, very well done!

luis veiga pumar:

the beginning and end are very good, i feel the distress of the character, but the middle section lets it down a bit (where the chracter squashes down around the possible anticpation, it's the weekest bit and it's unclear.

Dylan Maxwell:

Very cute and funny. maybe a second pose or mood at the end would bring it alive.

Jett Atwood:

It feels busy, too many poses without conveying any of the characters thoughts as the line is being delivered.