Igor Medovshikov:

I think he walks a little too fast. Also needs a little stronger poses.

Matt Hirengen:

good job. great staging and acting.

Ed. Hull:

Nice work, but n first breath chest puffs out too much. On father's head turn at frame 159-170 body is static and needs to react to head turn.

Josh:

Love the point at the end.

Curtis:

Nice treatment of the hands when they're on the fence. Did a great job of keeping them alive when they're not moving. I feel like the begnning of the piece is slightly over posed. Too many gestures.

alan:

love the ending pose. overall, good job

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

you need to work on animation little bit. overall its ok

Barnabas Boehler:

Some of poses hit a bit too hard. Like the head movements and when he points at his son.

Leow Chan Ghee:

Great acting choices. I'd say watch out for the walk and the breathing at the beginning of the piece. I also feel that some of the timing is a little too snappy, especially at the beginning of the shot; they look they they are popping from one pose to the other.

Matthew:

Good lipsyncing, but it freezes now and then.

Arnie Mecham:

Hey,
So this is really funny- I like your staging, and the background character has some fun stuff going on, if a bit robotic.
The dad kind of just glides up to the fence, I don't even think it's necessary to have him walk up really, just have him start at the fence since I don't think you're really getting anything by having move up to it.
Hope this helps,
Take care.

Frank G:

Some powerful gestures (e.g. big breath) and poses here. Experimenting with variation between subtlety and power may produce some interesting results next time. Cute point from secondary character at the end got a smile from me.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like it. The lip sync's a little out and the breath at the beginning is a little jerkier than it should have been but I think, by and large, it works very well.

NY:

don't overact your poses