Matt Hirengen:

Timing is a bit off, but decent acting.

Jeremy Schichtel:

lip sync is late...the mouth has to land on the shape before it can make the appropriate sound

Ed Lucas:

The lip sync is off. I do like the subtle gestures of the character. Nice job bro

Stewart:

weight. Watch those hips. LIke the acting choices.

alan:

wow, cool stuff. the animation is nice but the lip sync kind of throws me off. overall, excellent work

Chris Niewinski:

The lipsync looks a little off.

Erik Griott:

it might be my web browser but the sound didn't match up to the mouth shapes. my guess is that you put the mouth shapes on the frame of the sound, where since we are watching a video at 24 fps you need to offset the mouth shape with the key the sound hits so that when we watch it it matches up. its one of those scientific things i guess.

Curtis:

needs to be smoothed out quite a bit. His last expression isn't working for me just doesn't seem to fit the dialogue.

Ryan Fernan:

your audio is way off. I think it would be really good if it was lined up. Nice simple motion which is well executed.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is ok but you need to work on animation

Barnabas Boehler:

Wow, I really need to work on the Eyes and polish the body movements. Yikes!

chakravarma:

face expressions are not suitable for that words

Ronny:

movements are there but why not render man??? with those numbers look unfinished

rajeshk:

i m not sure about the lip-sync. But i like it the way staging is done.

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

Mark Homoky:

A great pice. Lots of expressive poses, including the wife(?) looking on and looking like it's the 'here we go again' speech. Love the 'upstanding pose' with the arm behind the back - time for a monologue?

Love the blinks and expressiveness of the eyes too - very well thought out and worthy contender of the monthly prize.

Good luck!

Brad Regier:

Way to go, BB!
I like how you tightened up the staging on the second shot. Their faces might get a bit too close though.
Check your audio; his mouth seems to be lagging behind the sound. The lip sync could stand to be more punchy in general.
Good going!

Raasi N:

father's in army officer performance looks neat..

Matthew:

The animation seems to pop now and then. Also, you don't seem to be hitting the second "gift" pose with enough "snap".

Traci Plagmann:

Nice job - I really like your acting choices and facial expressions. The lipsync feels a little bit slow to me in some places.

Chad Swanson:

good acting choices and nice staging.

Frank G:

Some good poses and nice progression toward camera in the second part where he gets more intense.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like it. It could be a tad smoother and the lip sync could do with some tightening but I think it's a good performance.