Matt Hirengen:

good job, but i'd like to see more full body acting. The dad could use more anticipation and overlapping action.

Amdbcg:

boys head never moves

Forrest:

inbetweens! or at least 2's. The motion is so subtle that 4's are getting stiff and lost. nice effort though

colus havenga:

good effort

Jeff Kim:

The dad could have used more head motion

Shon Stewart:

I like your poses. However the timing seems off on them. for example:

"anything" he should spread his hands just before anything instead of just after


"my son" point at his son just before he starts speaking. His actions should lead his voice, not be lead by them.

good job though!

Barnabas Boehler:

Sweet! I always love to see 2D because the character design is always original.

I would work on the arcs of the hands on some of the gestures. For instance, when he says "HE has a gift" it seems like the arm is rotating from the elbow...straight up and down like it's on a hinge I think it would be a lot better if you involved the shoulder and upper arm as well.

Otherwise I would try to get some darker lines on some of your drawings because it appears to be farded at times.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

nice

Mark Homoky:

Lovley animation of the boy juggling, but he could do with more movement in his body, face, eyes and feet. I can still juggle the 3 ball cascade but despite having done it for years I still need to move my body to keep catching the balls.

The father is a different story - I'm not sure looks wise if he's really all that bad at anything (he looks like a well built sports type guy) but I digress - this is about animiation not modelling or character design. The same criticism applies here as to the boy with the lack of torso movement, but this is made up for by the nice facial expressions and hand movements.

chakravarma:

small boy hands are moving but not hands...

Martin Silfvast:

Feels like there are some frames missing, its a bit choppy here and there. good effort!

Ryan Shannon:

lots of cycles here. could use a little more work. good job though.

Rick Benz:

not bad though the lipsync at the end needs more to be more prenounced, would be great to see a couple different camera angles to break the animation up

Antonio Linhares:

Even the boy being secondary focus in the scene, I think it should move a little more in order to give the right balance feel, specially the hips, and the eyes following the balls. The father is good though.

Brad Regier:

Nice appealing characters.
Probably should have gotten some shoulder/torso/head movement in that juggle cycle...

Chad Swanson:

The boy is way to static is head and legs don't move at all. The tweening on the father could use some work as well. Keep up the good work!