A Women's Event

Final Rating: 4.17. Finished: 58 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: Kyle Detwiler

Description: This father believes that his son is very talented at the balance beam-- an olympic event which, for some reason, is for women only.

Experience: Recent Graduate

Time taken: 50+ hours

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Ethan Cooksmith:

was ok up to the crotch joke

colus havenga:

i find your staging a bit awkward and causes me not to know where to look. more attention needed on the weight of the kid on the balance beam. good effort though

Amdbcg:

lol, funny concept :)
guy in the back (son?) - his movements don't seem smooth enough

Jeremy Schichtel:

shifts his weight too much

Matt Hirengen:

the gymnastic animation needs more work. it's too distracting.

Tim Roberts:

nice end w/ the kid on the bar

alan:

i love your idea. the son is really cool. overall, awesome work

Igor Medovshikov:

Animation on the girl could be better. Other characters are well animated. Well Done!

Timothy Yeo:

quite good but i think his legs shouldnt be apart so much if not too long. or his legs should move more. cos i think its tiring for someone to stand in that stance.

natalie:

ha! Nadia Comaneci! funny concept.

Barnabas Boehler:

Hmm. A few things I think could be improved upon.

1. the composition. The Main character is too close to the edge..he actually has the least amount of screen space of all the characters and his arms are getting cut off.

2. The kid needs some more attention since some of his movements are jerky and Stiff. I think the things you need to focus on are Spacing, arcs, overlap and followthrough as he hits the extremes of his flips.

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

rajeshk:

funny thing here is ,.. He is talking about his Son's Performance (son is Performing There..) and in the BG the Banner says " 2008 Trial's WOMEN GYMNASTICS"

LOL... : )

Clayton:

ouch

E. Cooman:

Great scene, love the ID. Great work!

Omri Navot:

you should refine the animation on the kid in the background

Brad Regier:

Nice work!
The hand stands look a bit awkward. Maybe try stretching his arms for those poses; his head gets in the way.

Chad Swanson:

funny, i like it. Good job!

Mark Homoky:

Very well thought out, well done. Good luck!