Proud Papa

Final Rating: 4.13. Finished: 61 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: James Lee

Description: At a meeting in a diner with his son's agent, a man starts to reflect . . .

Experience: 4 years as a student

Time taken: 3 weeks

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Barnabas Boehler:

Nice Job here..James

It's awesome to see you take on the challenge of 2D.
In the first scene, I think the mouth needs a little more flexibility..and maybe more range in the face as well.
Otherwise it looks like you just need to polish stuff up and add a few more in-betweens and details.

Matt Hirengen:

good acting.

colus havenga:

nice work

Erik Griott:

i like the mood of this.

Shon Stewart:

"He has a gift" need some more emotion there! Make is like like it sounds "HEEEE!!!"

good job!

Martin Silfvast:

looks very promising. i wished the animation would have been more complete, i wanna see it finished!

Rick Benz:

whos he talking to? should have had at least a head of another character, nice thought process though why is he smiling in the start?

KristiC:

not bad but your model is not too solid- eyes moving around relative to each other.

Carlos Fins:

First half was pretty good.. good expression and detail in the face and eyes.