alan:

good job. i love arm movements. i think the mouth could be a little less expressive but not but much. overall, it's a nice piece.

Matt Hirengen:

good acting, but he seems off the voice track by the end.

colus havenga:

nice work...i did have trouble making the bicycle out.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

Body movements are really good. Fit the audio's tone nicely.

David Shum:

It feels like he's hitting all his poses 3-5 frames too late. What you say should be the last thing in your thought process. I want to see his thought process thru his body language, before hearing it. You know what I mean?

David Higgins:

The arm movement is a little 'flappy' and the body language does not match well with the facial expressions but otherwise a good effort.

Kayum:

Good job on some of the more subtle gestures, e.g. the head movement at frame 90. In contrast I would try and tone down some of the more exaggerated movements, e.g. at frames 18, 240 and 322. These large poses perhaps aren't justified by what is quite a subtle audio track.

Also, the first pose at frame 1 is actually very appealing and perhaps the character didn't need to move too far away from this.

luv2animate:

Nice mood ..keep it coming!!

Martin Silfvast:

NIce!

Mark Homoky:

A very nice effort. Lots of good upper torso movement and expressive poses. Lip sync is slightly in need of work but some of that could be the Quicktime format (I hear some people have problems syncing the audio correctly).

Great use of the blinking, and it appears to be very natural making for an overall excellent 11s. Good luck!

Barnabas Boehler:

Overall this is really good, although I feel some gestures are a bit too broad like "this" and "acknowledge". I really like the "Than I have ever been at anything" movements though! Very nice.

Matt Kelly:

work on forming those mouth shapes a little more

Matthew:

Great snappy movement, though it's a little broad, could be more subtle.

Frank G:

I like this one. Maybe needs some attention to polish on the holds for the non gesturing arm. Good clarity in the general construction of poses.

Ashwani:

very nice animation