Matt Hirengen:

good acting. the ball needs work though.

Igor Medovshikov:

Lip sync could be better.

Amdbcg:

when you're using physics, make sure you get it right

Jeremy Schichtel:

check the curves of the ball, it feels too light around 58

Ed Lucas:

The coach seems dead and lip sync is slightly off. Nice acting for the father. Good job bro

Josh:

I really like the goofyness in the son's walk

Matthew:

There needs to be some more body mechanics and weight in the boy and ball, as well as in the dad as he walks away.

Kim Allen:

Enjoyed the start, with the little guy playing with the ball. From 360 on, it didn't read to me that the character was actually talking to the other character, and I didn't get the scene there was another character off screen. Nice work

Daniel Erwin:

wow... ambitious. soccer coach guy doesnt seem to be engaged and kinda looks dead a lot of the time. i thought of him more as a place holder than a secondary/complimentary character.

natalie:

I m asking you - but actually I address the question to many... Why do you guys distribute characters like that? The 3 are so different (each one is cool in his own way) but I become confused about the story. The world they live in, the type of characters they are.. There are a few broken rules I notice - but other than that, nice work.

Barnabas Boehler:

The kid bouncing a ball is a cool idea...but the ball feels a bit floaty like it's attached to a string. I think you need to increase the speed at which it falls and bounces back up.

I would reccomend getting a book on the Principles of Animation such as "The Animator's Survival Kit". That book is the bible for animators and is a huge help for explaining the principles of animation.!! Good luck!

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

raman:

nice one dude

but if they both pa and coach were sitting and watching the kid playing then it may be lil better because the seems waiting for his kid finish and look so still. which is lil unnatural.

hope this help

Vedanth Rajan:

i dont think the inital animation of the kid playing around with the ball was required!!!
i like the nice suttle action of the coach.

Chad Swanson:

The coach needs some work he has no personality or movement really. Good jobs on the others though keep up the good work!

Ashwani:

very nice

Frank G:

I felt the animating skill and effort was heavily weighted toward the introduction rather than the dialogue. Fun to watch.