Matt Hirengen:

A bit overacted, and some of the poses need more frames between them. But good posing and great staging.

Amdbcg:

I liked the concept :D
a little fast on the movements - and the arcs also seemed a little straight

Felipe Castanhari:

Good animation

Maybe the first plane hand could do some movement like move a little the fingers.
I miss the overlap, you probably used the method pose to pose, what meke the things all moving at the same time.

But is great, keep working

Carlos Chavez:

looks too linear to me...

Bill Zebleckis:

nice!

Ed Lucas:

Love the animation, though I feel the facial transition for "Maybe we'll have..." is too strong, counter to his previous expression. Nice job bro.

Candace Giancanelli:

I like!

Erik Griott:

i think the character off to the left should be included into the frame, at least over the shoulder. and the speaking character is right in the middle of the frame, i think he should be moves to the right just a tad more. your frame count is looking really high, about 4 times as many frames as any other entry that i have seen..i would suggest working at 24 or 30 fps.

natalie:

Great acting. Less of a story though.

Grace Mojica:

Good, but I think the table is too tall for him

Nary:

very nice.. like it a lot.. if the listener shows some subtle movements, it could be great..

Carol Cheng:

Good animation and lip sync. Timing was a bit off for the second "gift" and the "about" at the end.

Matt Kelly:

his emotional change doesnt feel real... hitting a few too many poses in the first half.. the slam on "gift" feels nice but the anticipation into it feels very linear

Brad Bradbury:

I suggest looking for more natural poses. every pose is symmetrical and all happen at the same time. Break this up to make things more lifelike.

Ashwani:

good

Frank G:

Nice table thump at the adrenalin moment. It was wonderfully led in to with the slow preparation movement. But at risk of twinning some of the gestures. maybe the 'maybe' was a bit broad. good sense of timing and spacing. Good work.