11sec_July_DogZ

Final Rating: 6. Finished: 7 out of 43 entries.
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Animator: Adrien B.L

Description: Done with Maya.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: one week (working in evening)

Comments:

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Rich Lauzon:

Not bad! Snappy! My one crit would be the staging of the last pose. Maybe get more of a hands in the air type of thing. Just an opinion.

Joaquin Bello:

you have grate poses , but something its not there...

David Humphreys:

a little stiff in places but its pretty cool and has some great timing

Brian Duffy:

ease in

ease out

Taber Dunipace:

The agent's sudden change is NOT anticipated, which makes it abrubt and unnatural. His legs shift in a very unnatural way and his facial expression just sticks in one possition for the rest of the animation. The other character is stronger, but still seems so jerky and punctuated that he's practically inhuman. Needs a lot more observation of animation principals and polish.

Erik Griott:

i like the acting here, very nice. also, you have some good movements with the characters, and i know where my focus should be. the only thing i dont particularly like is the fact that the black guys mouth is open after he pulls out the gun for no reason. at least, it seems like its open for too long or something,

P Walters:

"Ethical" seem too snappy. There's some really good movement going on, especially in the first half. nice key poses, good choices. I like the choice on the gun. Very nice.

Steve Sloan:

haha, i love the quick movements, you can see the characters thinking too, i love it. i didn't like how the guy with the gun holds his mouth open though (291).

Jett Atwood:

Nice! It's almost a little TOO snappy but it's fun to watch, the gestures make sense and the gag at the end is nice.

C. J. Cow:

lol i love the snappiness of this piece. great acting. i think maybe you could delay the guy's reaction to when andy says wait, just 1 or 2 frames.

miles southan:

Nice poses, but there are too many of them.

Marcos Borba Moreira:

very good, liked the poses, just when he says 'Wait" the other character reacts at the same time, would have him reacting 1 or 2 frames later, other then that, good job!

Virgil Mihailescu:

hm, the mail box was already open... :D
I like the poses and some small gestures, like the fingers touching the face in the beginning.

gerardo:

very good job, I like how you did the "hold poses", and little movements

Missy Feaster:

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiice. :) Very creative and nicely executed. Resist the urge to use hand gestures for each line.

Theo Edmands:

The acting on the main character is pretty good. however his gestures hit the beats of the dialog a little too close. The expression on the gun guy at the end needs some life so he's not holding it for so long without any movement.

Dhar:

Very nice work overall. The reaction of the guy in black is a little too sharp. A few too many cliches with pointing the finger and W poses for the guy in t-shirt. Other than that, a pretty good performance.

Victor Wong:

That works very well. A little twinning action happening on the part of the first guy, but excellent interpretation of the snik and good acting at the end.

Aaron Clement:

I like the guy in the suit. The first action by the ball guy felt a little too quick. Good staging.

Damodar V Sawant:

looks pose to pose needs some breakdowns

ArunVijayan:

nice work!!!!if u give little more acting to that main char...it will look very nice!!!!

Christopher Lutz:

Nice snappy motions!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job! I like the poses and the timing. Both characters move really nice and the animation reads very well. I might've added some follow through to the surprise of the second character on "wait" and maybe a weight shift to add to the bored face. Nonetheless, well done! ;)

Jan Becher:

Very good story-solving at the end

Cory Dornbusch:

Robert-Jon Eckhardt:

The gun is GREAT!!
Agent Smith's reaction on "wait" seems to abrubt, while the abrubtness of Mr. Anderson on "consider" and "ethical" are really strong.
The strongest point is that Agent Smith is really alive and present throughout the animation. He changes expression, he blinks. That's great.

Gregory Marlow:

bald guys head never seems to look up. Looks odd

Roshan.k:

ha ha that's great contrast in alfred's personality! love it!

David Shum:

AHhasah!

Funny piece.
I like the hard poses you're hitting.
Perhaps it needs 1, or 2 smooth transitions, so to have higher contrast with the hard hitting poses you have.

Love the face+stagger on MIB on the back there when he pulls the gun haha.

Jônatas Kerr de Oliveira:

nice arms gesticulation on the left guy, but need some body movement. the body looks stiff.
On the right guy, the final pose is so stiff too...

Winnie . S:

i like the snappy actions and especially the first reaction of black guy!

Olivier Ladeuix:

good stuff but I am always a bit reluctant to see characters threatened by guns or knifes on screen. Guns kill.

Christiaan Moleman:

Entertaining. I like your poses and ideas and the snappy timing adds to the humour, but I think you may have overdone it a bit. You switch from one pose to the next sometimes over just one frame. You could cushion or anticipate these moves more to soften them...

Mike Courtney:

There is popping on the characters. Once a pose is hit, nothing happens. Try some moving holds. The lip-sync is alright.

Max Herzfeld:

This was good it just came across a bit un natural. Some movements were to sudden and quick and others seemed to freeze.
Keep your characters alive and breathing.
Nice work though.