someone's mail !!
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Erik Griott:
nice! there is lots of character here, and very interesting acting choices.
Rich Lauzon:
Nice. I would have tried to keep red guy curving around the knife for a few frames...
Taber Dunipace:
Good character interaction, acting chioces and gestures. The animation is clear and to the point, but I still feel as if something is missing. The characters more specifically and clearly, but it seems like the pink guy is standing in an increadibly uncomfrotable way for most of the animation. I think they could both use a bit more personality too.
Jett Atwood:
Watch the balance on the characters poses. There are some poses they would have just fallen right over. Other poses look decidedly uncomfortable which diminishes the enjoyment watching the clip.
P Walters:
nice
Steve Sloan:
Nice style, nothing to crit really.
jeff beck:
i liked it but i think your blue guy needs more movement he just stands their kinda still
Santiago Arellano:
Perhaps, some of the poses of the pink guy are not very suitable for the age he sounds.
Theo Edmands:
The pink guy's reaction to the knife is quite nice. The angles on the hips however are too extreme on both characters which make them seem a bit off balance.
Missy Feaster:
Cute'n'bouncy! No complaints here. :)
Dan Dulberger:
Animation look pretty smooth but the rig has some issues (joint popping and bad joint placement/deformation) which unfortunately spoil the overall effect. Perhaps not your fault, but still your problem.
Salvador García Luque:
excellent animation, but I think something is not quite well in the lipsync. By the way nice funny sketch
C. J. Cow:
top notch acting! love the timing. maybe during some key poses held very long you could consider adding subtle movements so the characters arent completely still? just an opinion
Gabe Dill:
solid cartoony action here. i usually hate this rig because it always looks like there are joints appearing in random places on the body... but you used it very effectively... nice stuff
Chad Hannah:
nice gestures, good timing!
Aaron Clement:
Nice, I like the little shrug by the blue guy at the end. I don't know why he pat his chest at the beginning, though (300) felt odd... nice clip.
Christopher Lutz:
Nice interaction between the characters. Well done!
Robert-Jon Eckhardt:
I really like this one! It really acts out the script, where many of the other animations don't. The moment where Pink pushes Blue away is very strong. Also I like how Blue is kinda cool, but he seems too stiff when Pink is talking.
I get the coolness and it really works, but he should not be frozen for that long. Really good overall!
Bilal Ahmad:
flawless! man! this is neat!
Juliano Bezerra:
Very good man! Nice job!
Gregory Marlow:
I like it. Lip sync seems off though.
Roshan.k:
a small weight issue on hips in the 97 to 133 frames on the old guy. i love the acting..awesome facial expressions !
Christiaan Moleman:
I like your timing but you need to move the rest of the body when you do an action or gesture with part of it. Even a head move or small gesture will still have an effect on the whole body.
Victor Wong:
Excellent syncing of both lip and actions. Good facial expressions.
Mike Courtney:
During the red's speaking part the blue one becomes completely stationary. Characters in the scene need to be kept alive.
Adriel Restrepo:
Very nice work! Great job with the strong poses and timming. I really like the facial expressions too! I really like how you made the blue guys hands look when the mail is taken away. Keep up the great work!
riyaz R:
kidilum chettaa
Max Herzfeld:
It's almost claymation.
great job









Animator: nideep
Description: this z my first entry for an online competition...hope to learn alot from here...critics please!
Experience: nothing much.
Time taken: 4 days