Rich Lauzon:

It gets better as the clip moves along... The "We Have to" Guy is a little over the top compared to his voice and the acting of the second character

Brian Duffy:

if you're going to cut the camera, change the angle to something more dynamic rather than a slight pan in

great animation/gag

Jett Atwood:

That's GREAT. Good posing, good gags and very nice lipsync without it getting too busy/mushy.

Steve Sloan:

i love his facial expressions, except for that smile at the end.

P Walters:

pretty decent. Nice mouth movements. Some of the body movements need a little work

Frank Collazo:

good nice finger animation

C. J. Cow:

good stuff yo! very unique take, too!

gerardo:

I don’t like the acting, I think is simple, very lineal: monotonous, I like more contrast

David Humphreys:

the hand hold up looks a little stiff. great lip sync though!

Missy Feaster:

Nicely done. Try not to let that arm run parallel to the frame when he raises it.

Theo Edmands:

Acting choices generally are pretty good. I don't buy the "i swear" gesture though.

Matt:

cool idea with the fishing rod

miles southan:

Nice work! Good idea, good poses. The fingers need to be more offset , especially around 148-170 and 265-272 (according to your frame counter). Watch out for hitting a wall at frame 174. Check the arc on the ethical hand pose too. The head back motion's a bit jerky, especially around 286.

Aaron Clement:

I like the animation on Bishop. Felt a little too fast at the beginning... Good acting choices... good imagination.

ArunVijayan:

nice acting...but i think u should smooth this animation little more...then it will be more good......

Bayu Sulistyo:

funny idea :D

Traci Plagmann:

Great job! Good staging and acting choices. The only thing I would change is his smile at the end to make it a little wider and natural looking.

Taber Dunipace:

This is a good effort, but a few eccentricities in the animation bring it down. The fishing character freezes dead several times, which is distracting and doesn't have nearly the polish of the other character. Also the final emotional shift, although funny, is also unnatural and confusing to a small degree.

vic:

nice work...

Christopher Lutz:

Nicely done!

Piotr Krysik:

Hehe, nice idea with that fishing pole ;) But how do they know if they pulled the right envelope out? :P But seriuosly: overtall animation is good, but with technicall error with IK on the arm at frames 159-160. As for acting for me it's not bad or too good either - neutral I'd say.

Bilal Ahmad:

a good effort, but i can't understand why bishop's wordings contradict his end actions...

Alex Zemke:

I really like the concept, but there's an inorganic quality to many of th poses, and often the rigs feel broken. Focus on more natural poses, and keep working on timing; there are several points here when a character moves too far, in too few frames, with no anticipation of that move. Remember to think of your character as a whole, not a series of parts, and keep that frame of mind for the overall piece as well.

Gregory Marlow:

Pretty good. Some poses seems a bit forced though.

Jennifer Anaya:

nice ending and resolution.

Chris Smith:

Good work overall.
Original idea, too, with the fishing line and hook gag.

David Shum:

good poses. needs some cleaning up tho

Jennifer Blom:

Lol great job. Love the twist with the fishing pole well done.

Victor Wong:

Excellent acting and timing of gestures. Lip sync is done very well here.

Scott Farrell:

nice idea! I like a lot of the choices, my biggest concern was in the begining theres a big move on screen left, then a big move on screen right then the horn guy makes a nother big pop screen left, my eyes felt like I was watching a ping pong match for a second

Adriel Restrepo:

Great work!! Really like the poses and facial expressions. Cool idea and camera cut too!

Mike Courtney:

There are places in the animation where the characters pop. Try easing into and out of these poses instead.

Max Herzfeld:

Good animation, but the character was not at all solid.
I liked the fishing rod in the mail "box"
good job overall.

Christiaan Moleman:

I think you might be overlapping the head (Bishop) too much on the move to the mailbox.