Taber Dunipace:

A bit too much action going on, and no real character in the poses.

Gao:

the lipsync needs the mouth shapes to read better, look at how you would speak the words in a mirror for reference. Also you would usually want to animate the lipsync 1-2 frames before each sound for it to sync up properly, if you animate them on the beat, more often then not it will be slower then the sound when played

Victor Wong:

Watch out for twinning when the guy does his hand clap.

Radhika:

the lip sync is a bit off, but nice movements

Tim Nowak:

this shows nothing of .....nothing. BUT good body movement.

Henning Koczy:

He looks constantly off-balance.

Erik Westlund:

A lot of the poses are random and only have a passing resemblance to what is happening on the audio. Rhythm of laughter is completely missing from movement. Most of the lip-sync appears to be missing from facial work so far. Gag at the end seems to be just tacked on. I don't get the sense that you know what it is like to work in a sound studio on the microphone end of things... if you do, that knowledge hasn't made it into this performance. Subtle, familiar realities of this kind of experience are absent.

HARISH:

looks floaty. also need to check on when the neck going back,its too extreme. keep trying.

RJay Bengelink:

nice movement on "where are we going"