Better be a senile
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Ken Rice:
Nice idea with the fish.
Julianne McCartney:
The lipsync was pretty weak. I think there needs to be stronger mouth movements.
Mike York:
Looks like we have a fish animation competition now Uh oHH!!
I like your idea but I think the animation is very limited and stale feeling. Push your poses some more and really exxagerate as much as you can.
Greg M. Johnson:
Funny.
Richie Blitz:
haha nice idea, very clever.
Tim Nowak:
its alright but more for little kids, needs work on the lip sync
James Parsons:
Nice, the lip synch was a little sketchy but the timing of the punchline was well delivered.
Bill Radford:
I like the theme. lots of hiccups in the animation. not much emotion. very good movement
Victor Wong:
Although these are fish that have wave abilities built into their bodies, you really need to be careful about controlling anatomy, otherwise volume problems can result.
Richard Bannister:
Hehe, Great gag!! :)
Erik Westlund:
Movements are too jerking and linear. Fins waving in water have been overemphasized making them distracting. Layering of faces on top of bodies is not convincing... the faces seem to float separately from the bodies of the fish.
Nathan Jent:
I laughed out loud. Very funny twist.
Aaron Clement:
Interesting style... the expressions needs exaggerating, though.









Animator: Uri Ashkenazi
Description: Made by cutout at flash.
Experience: 6 month
Time taken: 20 hours, after college