My Best Day
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Ken Rice:
This is a nice animation - a little floaty in places. If I had any major critisism I would say your animation is a bit flat, could do with more dynamic action.
Taber Dunipace:
Nice stylizing of pre-made rigs! I like the acting choices and setting here, they work very well. Kinda jerky and uncontrolled in the animation though, but I'm sure it's nothing you couldn't polish out.
Elliott Gibson II:
Needs lip sync to be on point....some more gestures would probably help...nice background though!
Greg M. Johnson:
Very high score not just because of the fully developed scenery. I LOVE the head movements and facial expressions.
Patrick Algermissen:
Great animation. Story not very clear.
Adam Clark:
I love the staging of scene and action. The swaying of the females head bothers me a little. Man in the blue is good. Man in green has some awkward movement after "mine too."
Ceno:
i like the croma!
Erik Westlund:
Shifting weight of characters is very believable. Central character's laugh is not as convincing at all. The head turn on Phil when he answers, "Mine too." is kind of wobbly. Except for the last statement "I got that." most of the mouth and facial animation is lacking in punch or rhythms that match the audio. The way the characters shift there focus works when you only look at the head movement, but eyes are static and largely lacking in believability... needs 'eye darks' and other signs of stochastic eye movement. Again, reversals are really working.
Jason Smith:
Timing seemed a little off and a little 'floaty'. Great piece overall, I love their ski/snowboard outfits.
Senthilnathan D:
nice work...........
Pablo Piccione:
Excelent....! Nice Staging...nice "flow"...I really liked it
Chris:
extra stars for bg and the hats !
Mathias AUBRY:
really like the idea, the background and the render of the characters!
The animation is really good too but I bit floaty sometimes.
Eric Scheur:
I love the background! Makes me think of those 1960's rear-projection moments in movies and tv.
But, of course, I'm not voting based on the background--this is animation after all! ;)
I think you have some really nice moments in here. Your poses are really natural. Almost any frame I stop on, the poses are clear and appealing. Nice work with the facial expressions, too!
The one thing I'd recommend is to hold your poses a bit longer so that we get a chance to read them. I feel like there's not a chance for the viewer's eye to really focus on a character so we can read their emotions.
Look at the middle guy from 31 to 86, for example. He's rocking back and forth, so it's tough for us to tell what his attitude is. I think that if you held the pose at 14 and then went to the pose at 76, we'd have a much clearer understanding of the acting here.
So, just to sum up: great poses, but I wish we could see them for longer. :)
Derek Mabson:
Nice animation. This only thing that really bothers me is it looks like she is patting his business giving him a not so subtle hint about where they are really going. Keep it clean.
Chris Woods:
Was this mo-capped?
Max Rodriguez:
RJay Bengelink:
Love the staging and background.
Aaron Clement:
A little floaty. I like the background... the the original aspect to it. Acting could be better









Animator: Mike York
Description: Enjoy !
Experience: Not enough
Time taken: 5 Days