Mike York:

I like your idea of having the car talk. The ending feels a little to forced though I think.

Julianne McCartney:

The lipsync needs to be stronger.

Josh Doohen:

good animation, poses, and story reference. camera needs a lil work. great effort!

Mariano Villegas Gonzalez:

Second time I saw it.

Maureen Seng:

Love the finger curl the guy did when he's laughing. Nice work!

Gao:

nice idea, but it would be better if you can bring across the mental asylum destination without hitting the audience with a sign like that. try to convey that through the acting, "show them, dont tell them". Maybe having him fiddling with a strait jacket would convey that idea better

Henning Koczy:

Sweetness. Excellent character coming through aniamtion, perfect punchline.

David Shum:

haha i like that ending

Erik Westlund:

Sorry but the car as character isn't working. Both male characters are shouting and laughing towards the end, but the car at that point has 'returned' to simply being a car. The pushing and patting on chest is a very convincing treatment to use for what is on the audio.

Senthilnathan D:

nice job....

Christiaan Moleman:

The car talking seems a bit odd, but otherwise the scene works nicely.

Max Rodriguez:

He pops a bit when getting into the car.

Amelia Kurth:

I think you need more tongue animation - you especially notice that it is missing on "got that"

Great idea with the talking car!

Aaron Clement:

Good... the laugh was a little late... felt a little contrived at times... not too bad, though.

Ken:

Nice! Just some comments about the animation: At the beginning when he goes back to his seat, his right arm seemed to be snapping. You might like to smooth out that part more. Also, at the 2nd laughter just before he said "Oh, I got that", there're 2 people laughing in the dialouge but you only showd the guy laughing. I suggest you could make the car laugh too by just shaking it a little.