Marshall:

Nice staging. Good business. Lip sync is a little off in places.

Julianne McCartney:

I loved the facial expressions on this one! The lipsync needs work though.

Mike York:

Like the idea alot. This time I don't mind not seeing the other character. You made the audience feel like they were the character sort of a POV

Matthew Simkins:

The dangly parachute prop is a big distraction in this one. Nice idea to get some scene interaction with the character but as soon as she hits the prop it steals the show and the eye is drawn to it instead of watching the other character.

Taber Dunipace:

Very nice. Good expressions and animation quality. I'm still not quite sure what the joke is, but this is definitely entertaining anyway.

Mark Stoughton:

With a little more exaggeration it would be get another couple of stars

Kent Wong:

Very funny reaction at the end...nice work

Alexandar Ivanchev:

That's great idea... I just think that her head movements are a bit too many when she is trying to show him the parachute.

Sunny Kharbanda:

The lipsync needs work. Also try pushing the camera in closer, so we only see what we need to and nothing that distracts us.

Brad Bradbury:

good animation-- but I didn't got that. whats with the parachute guy??

Erik Westlund:

Simple setup with a reasonable explanation for what is going on (ornament on mirror). Slap on dashboard isn't working. Maybe she should move as if slapping character in front seat on the thigh... we don't have to see the whole movement for it to be understandable. Not enough reversals in poses for front seat character. Chuckle/laughter is only reflected in chin/mouth. His whole upper body should reflect that rhythm. Pose on male character is too symmetrical between left and right sides... horizontal lines, not enough competing angles. Transitions between poses needs more flavor (in the breakdowns). Finish is nice; very readable and accurate for story.

Roger:

Great acting and little story! Guess the animation is probably not final (due to the submission deadline) but very good so far. Some moving holds and stronger arcs would definitely make this animation greater!

Max Rodriguez:

Nicely done.

RJay Bengelink:

Nice facial expression on the figure on the right at "I got that".