Happy birthday!
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Mark Bogdanoff:
Love the idea.
Greg M. Johnson:
Excellent expression of character. Nice interpretation of script.
Taber Dunipace:
Cool concept, and a CG joke right there in the animation! You know your audience. I was a bit confused by the jerky nature of the hairy guy's movements. Seemed kinda forced.
Andrew Linke:
funny concept, and i like the camera moves, i also really like the final pose of the main character.
Lauren Andersson:
great idea!
Jason:
hilarious! only thing is the action is jerky at most parts. the composition is great. nice hair effects.
Some of the poses seem a bit over-the-top and too exaggerated, almost forced
Matthew Simkins:
the hair is super distracting. You could definitely get away with static modelled hair and still keep the same gag plus it would keep it in the same style as the rest of the scene.
Jerry Zigounakis:
Very funny, very original and great facial expressions
Ken Rice:
Nice idea - spinning chair seems to stop dead though.
Elisa:
at first I though the movement of the first guy was too exagerated, but at the end I realized it had a purpose :)
Nice story!
Raphaela Gurgel:
Muito engraçado e bem feito!
Emmanuel:
haha very funny!
Justin Weg:
Haha nice fro
Emmanuel Vergne:
maybe too "hysterical"
cristinel bostan:
good humore but the animation needs more.
Frank G:
Straight away I thought, "That guy needs a hair cut."
There's some good animation, timing, acting stuff here that puts this one up near the point of the voting pyramid.
Jerome Heuze:
Very good script, but the character with hair is too much animated for me. Great work on the launching of the chair.
Radhika:
cool idea..nice animation
Virgil Tanasa:
i like the idea :) good work!
gerardo castellanos:
a interesting version
Christopher Salamat:
Boobs look creepy...
Tim Nowak:
This was really good. It was like a cartoon-like short but in 3D. This shows a LOT of emotion and character. Im not going to say over kill, but its was a liiiiiiittle over bord. It was good though. I watched this a couple times and i laughed everytime. Good Video.
Yahya:
i like this one. quite funny animation
V_I_C_K_Y:
Idea is nice
James Parsons:
The theme was strong and the facial expressions were nice. The movement was a little overexagerated early on and the hairs constant movent was also a little distracting. Overall a nice piece.
HARISH:
Females legs are sliding ,check that. also the guy sitting on the chair, the head movement while laughing at the start is too exaggerated, looks like he bangs on the cake. females upper body and specifically the shoulders look stiff. else......good stuff
Ceno:
good guy u better now
Erik Westlund:
Center character's movement is too spastic and jerky. Breasts on female character are so unnaturally round, high, and forward that they distract from the performance. My eyes keep darting back to the "deformed" female character. Subtle hint of female form would have worked just fine. The quality of your concept is not very well supported by the execution. I like the movement of the chair push and turn.
Beth:
Loved it, but the animation went a little fast, and the lip sync seemed a bit off.
Jason Smith:
Great chair throw!!
Chris:
not bad
Siva Kumar:
That was funny !
Max Rodriguez:
I couldn't really read the finger pointing gesture well, and the laugh seems awkward, especially with his left arm. Good idea though.
James Stevenson:
haha nice! Some great touches too. Well done, great work.
Brad Regier:
fun hair
Simon Ridge:
Maybe slightly over the top in places, makes it a little hard to follow everything, but a cool idea
Rebecca D.:
Great interpretation. Love the expression at the end and that hair is awesome!
Ellen Erikson:
I love your story! It's simple and clear - and very funny:-)
Animation can improve, a few things that I noticed; When the main character starts laughing around frame 90-130 the movement seams a bit too big and uncontrolled for this dialogue. Also, the womens pose around frame 240 until she goes offscreen seams a bit awkward. Maybe try to keep the body bent forward a bit more. Happy animating!









Animator: Cledson
Description: this guy will gonna have a surprise
Experience: 1,5 year
Time taken: 2 weeks