Julianne McCartney:

Nice poses. The lipsync was a bit weak.

Taber Dunipace:

Pretty good! A little stiff in the poses at times and they seem rooted to the spot, but overall very nice.

Jamie Giger:

Good but to me it would have made more sense if the middle guy would have directed the question to the girl instead.

Elisa:

the female character reactions are really cute and fit perfectly :)

James Parsons:

Nice scene, I like the interaction between the characters and it flows nicely.

Sunny Kharbanda:

I like some of the poses, and the timing. The guy in the middle gets a little off-balance when he takes his arm off Phil's shoulder. And the personality of the woman is a little unclear. You could elevate this shot to a much higher level by adding clarity and more nuances to her acting.

Erik Westlund:

Some pretty good posing on central character. I especially like pose on "Where are we going?" Quickly gets weak on "Oh, let's not spoil it." (140-177) Line-of-action pretty much doesn't move for female character until the end. Staging could be a little more interesting perhaps if characters were not evenly distributed across the screen.

Juan Z.:

needs work

Jason Smith:

Love the point at the end. Great job.

Jonathan Paquin:

All body mechanics and poses are good but it lacks the "purpose". They don't look like they are having the best day of their lives so it kinda kills the believability.

Aaron Clement:

The ending was good... the lip sync was off... nice natural feel to the second half, though.... good job.