11 second club January 2008

Final Rating: 4.87. Finished: 24 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: Daniel MacGregor

Description: Maya used with Andyrig. I had some trouble with the textures and rendering as I'm still learning this program.

Experience: 7 years

Time taken: 2 and a half weeks

Comments:

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Jason:

hahah, very nice animation here. fluid in every sense of the word. the weight of the characters is great! especially at the laugh!!! only thing is push the expressions a bit more. also, the lipsync needs a lot of work.

Tomas Jech:

the lip sync is very unclear. Maybe grasp certain syllables and hold them longer to pop those words out? The 12 principles apply to the mouth as well...

Victor Wong:

Some volume issues with the female character. Good physical action.

HARISH:

looks a bit linear at places, also I would have loved to see more expression on PHIL. but apart from that...........GOOD STUFF !!! keep it up

Frank G:

Good acting and meaningful poses.

Simon:

Great poses.

Aaron Clement:

Not too bad... the lip sync was off and it was a little floaty... nice energy in there.

lucas:

i like it. a little over the top on that last laugh

Senthilnathan D:

good work....

sharad kumar:

ha ha ha..is he drunk!!...good poses but animation seems to float .And..uhmm!..did he kiss her in the end???

Erik Westlund:

Acting choices are far from ordinary and yet are very believable. I think I went to school with that obnoxious guy. Maybe we all have. Good demonstration of weight and nice job shifting focus between characters. One flaw that stands out to me is that the hand poses are very close to the default pose of the character setup. Faces are not as flexible in movement either. Nice finish with center character in female character's face. He really is obnoxious.