Taber Dunipace:

Same problem I had, three characters and too much to do. Try to keep it simple and within your ability to complete. I know I've got to try to do the same!

Ken Rice:

Not bad but I think your characters aren't connecting with each other: they appear

Mark Stoughton:

The premise is good and the lighting is very good for th situation. The actions on the characters are a little floaty though.

Maureen Seng:

the characters are floaty, and its a bit strange to see the girl turn her head away instead of looking at the bald guy when she speaks.

Aaron Clement:

I like the natural lighting. The fingers are all straight... they need to be bent to feel more natural. Overall, it feels quite stiff. Quite cliche with the point at the end.

Henning Koczy:

Weightless, and none of them hit a strong pose... just stand around awkwardly.

lucas:

movement is kkind of jerky

Dieter Wagner:

lots of floatiness. you have some good poses, you just need to break the timing and rhythem up so they don't feel like they are swimming through the scene.

Ceno:

u better now

Erik Westlund:

Arms are very stiff. Punching gesture of center character is awkward and pops around a bit. Hands are mostly flat and posed unnaturally. Female character turning away from audience is odd and doesn't seem to serve any purpose at first since the 'electric chair' is so far back in the distance.

Max Rodriguez:

The arm swing up is very poppy. Very slow on the down-action. Very stiff animation allaround.