Julianne McCartney:

This turned out pretty well! If only there were more time! I still like it. I'd like to see you finish this up. It would be great!

Taber Dunipace:

Nice! Especially considering the effort I saw you put into this. Remember to never stop practicing and you'll be doing really well!

Ken Rice:

This is a fun animation you’ve made but I feel there’s too much happening at once. And to be honest in places I don’t think it's clear what's going on.
I look forward to your next animation.

Joe Mitchell:

clever story, the set is a bit distracting though

HARISH:

good one .

Adam Clark:

Needs some more polish

Avner Engel:

Well done franky!

Daniel Luke:

I remember seeing this in it's WIP stages. Really great result. Your characters have a great sense of movement and shape.

Bill Radford:

i like the movement. good effort

Frank G:

Don't give up your day job.

Ceno:

very good idea,
i like 2d

Erik Westlund:

Main character (student driver) has some nice changes in line-of-action. Good use of reversals. You have a lot of tricky stuff to explain in this scenario... seems like a bit too much actually. How the instructors arrive, where the key is, how to distract him while the key is removed, the fact that the key has been removed... as so on. Its a lot to demand of yourself when trying to put a performance over. Too much, I think when some much is 'out of the ordinary'. Contrast of foreground elements is competing for attention with with character performances.

Christiaan Moleman:

It's cool that you're changing up the context from the original dialogue but it could be clearer. I guess Phil hides the key but I'm not sure why?

The rapid moving side to side on "where are we going" looks really broken. It's a good idea, but you need to add some overlap and follow through and soften this up a bit.

Overall you've got some nice acting choices but you need to clarify the staging and intention of the story and work on the mechanics a bit.

Ron Price:

Nice scenario. I'm not sure his voice matches his attitude on "I got that"

Michael Petro:

good progress since your first WIP. still a bit hard to understand what's going on though

Max Rodriguez:

Very poppy.